Measurement report: dual-carbon isotopic characterization of carbonaceous aerosol reveals different primary and secondary sources in Beijing and Xi'an during severe haze events

Ni, Haiyan; Huang, Ru-Jin; Cosijn, Max M.; Yang, Lu; Guo, Jie; Cao, Junji; Dusek, Ulrike

doi:https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-20-16041-2020

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https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-20-16041-2020

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https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-20-16041-2020

© Author(s) 2020. This work is distributed under
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Articles | Volume 20, issue 24

Measurement report

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22 Dec 2020

Measurement report |

| 22 Dec 2020

Measurement report: dual-carbon isotopic characterization of carbonaceous aerosol reveals different primary and secondary sources in Beijing and Xi'an during severe haze events

Haiyan Ni, Ru-Jin Huang, Max M. Cosijn, Lu Yang, Jie Guo, Junji Cao, and Ulrike Dusek

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RC1: 'Review of the manuscript', Anonymous Referee #2, 20 Jul 2020
RC2: 'Review of Ni et al.', Anonymous Referee #1, 03 Sep 2020
AC1: 'Response to reviewers', Haiyan Ni, 02 Oct 2020

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AR by Haiyan Ni on behalf of the Authors (03 Oct 2020) Author's response Manuscript

ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (21 Oct 2020) by Willy Maenhaut

The authors have reasonably well addressed the comments of the two anonymous referees and they have modified their manuscript accordingly. However, several alterations and corrections are needed for the Main text and Supplement before the manuscript can be published in ACP.

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We investigated sources of carbonaceous aerosols in Beijing and Xi'an during severe winter haze. Elemental carbon (EC) was dominated by vehicle emissions in Xi’an and coal burning in Beijing. Organic carbon (OC) increment during haze days was driven by the increase in primary and secondary OC (SOC). SOC was more from fossil sources in Beijing than Xi’an, especially during haze days. In Xi’an, no strong day–night differences in EC or OC sources suggest a large accumulation of particles.