Articles | Volume 26, issue 21
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-15653-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Characterisation of hygroscopic aerosol processes using remote sensing and in situ techniques at the MeteoSwiss Payerne station
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Overall, this manuscript presents a valuable and comprehensive dataset on aerosol hygroscopicity from the HYGRO19 campaign, combining Raman lidar, COBALD-RS41 balloon measurements, tandem nephelometry, and complementary aerosol observations. The large number of hygroscopic aerosol layers retrieved from RALMO is particularly valuable and demonstrates the potential of remote-sensing observations to provide vertically resolved information on aerosol hygroscopicity under ambient atmospheric conditions. The comparison with independent in situ techniques is also an important strength of the study. The observed variability in hygroscopicity between different periods and its association with aerosol chemical composition provide useful insights into the factors controlling aerosol water uptake. However, I believe that the interpretation of the intercomparison and the term “robust characterisation” requires some further clarification. The different techniques probe distinct optical properties (backscatter versus total scattering), wavelengths, particle populations, and sampling conditions; therefore, the retrieved hygroscopicity parameters are not directly equivalent. The authors appropriately acknowledge that the comparisons are primarily qualitative, but the implications of these methodological differences and the associated uncertainties should be discussed more explicitly before drawing general conclusions regarding the capability of remote sensing to quantitatively characterise aerosol hygroscopicity. Although the paper is too lengthy for a research article, some material could be included in a supplementary session. Here are my comments.
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Line 7: The manuscript refers to “three independent approaches.” Since the Raman lidar, COBALD-RS41, and tandem nephelometer measurements are based on different optical quantities and are not fully independent, the authors may consider using “three complementary approaches” instead.
Lines 464-465: “The tandem nephelometers' measurements are only representative of near-surface conditions.” Please revise to “the tandem nephelometer measurements are representative only of near-surface conditions.”
Line 639: The terminology “RALMO measurements alone enable the retrieval of aerosol hygroscopicity parameters” may be slightly too broad. Since the retrieval requires specific atmospheric conditions, particularly a well-mixed layer and suitable RH structure, I suggest changing this to “RALMO measurements can enable the retrieval…” or explicitly retaining the conditions under which the retrieval is applicable.
Lines 424-425: the statement “during summer, more wind profiles could be monitored due to lower cloud cover and bird migration”. Can you explain bird migration? Bird migration is not obviously connected to the availability of wind lidar measurements, or is that a typo?
General comment
The authors could consider moving some of the detailed case studies from Section 4.3 to the Supplementary Material. This could help shorten the manuscript and allow the main text to focus more clearly on the methodology and interpretation of aerosol hygroscopicity retrieval.