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Ozone dry deposition through plant stomata: multi-model comparison with flux observations and the role of water stress as part of AQMEII4 Activity 2
Olivia E. Clifton
Jesse O. Bash
Sam Bland
Nathan Booth
Philip Cheung
Lisa Emberson
Johannes Flemming
Erick Fredj
Stefano Galmarini
Laurens Ganzeveld
Orestis Gazetas
Ignacio Goded
Christian Hogrefe
Christopher D. Holmes
László Horváth
Vincent Huijnen
Qian Li
Paul A. Makar
Ivan Mammarella
Giovanni Manca
J. William Munger
Juan L. Pérez-Camanyo
Jonathan Pleim
Limei Ran
Roberto San Jose
Donna Schwede
Sam J. Silva
Ralf Staebler
Shihan Sun
Amos P. K. Tai
Timo Vesala
Tamás Weidinger
Zhiyong Wu
Leiming Zhang
Paul C. Stoy
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- Final revised paper (published on 07 Aug 2025)
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- Preprint (discussion started on 09 Oct 2024)
- Supplement to the preprint
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-3038', Anonymous Referee #1, 14 Nov 2024
General comments
This manuscript presents a multi-model comparison of O3 dry deposition from chemistry climate models with the same observed flux-based estimates at six locations in the Northern Hemisphere. The observational dataset includes a good number of station sites distributed across continents with a good temporal resolution and are or can become available under request. The methodology followed is well explained and properly referenced. Results are clearly presented and discussed. Comparisons with other results in existing relevant literature and the characteristics of each evaluated site justify their findings. The authors made a comprehensive revision of previous studies including stomatal conductance models. The manuscript tries to fill a gap in our knowledge and is relevant for the scientific community, especially for atmospheric chemistry modelers. I only have some suggestions that will improve the quality and readability of the manuscript.
- Line 147, equation (5): the authors explained all the terms in the equation except for B. Could the authors briefly describe what B represents?
- In lines 259 and 260, it is said that the number of sensitivity simulations depends on the model, which can be seen in Figures 4 and 5, and after that, the authors explain the reason behind that. However, I think the manuscript would be clearer if the number of sensitivity tests and the perturbed parameters per model were summarized in a Table.
- On a related note, Table 2 lists the parameters perturbed in the sensitivity test with their corresponding range of values. However, the reader does not know the default values for each parameter and model nor the magnitude of the perturbations with respect to that default value. I think it would be interesting to see this information, perhaps adding it to the table I suggested in point 2.
- Line 399: it is the first time that BVPD appears in the text, but it is not explained what it means. Please, include a brief description.
- Line 405: wrong reference to Figure 5 (it should be Figure 3).
- Lines 419 and 420: “…a reduction from 0.191 to -0.008 cm s−1 for MLC-CHEM…”. Please, revise either the values in the text or the values plotted in Figure 4. In that figure, the values of the wilting point for MLC-CHEM in July go from around 0.2 to something close to -0.2, if I understood correctly.
- Line 465: “..50 cm depth depth..”, please, delete the repeated “depth”.
- Line 552: “…the most important driver of the the…”, please, delete the repeated “the”.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-3038-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Anam Khan, 18 Feb 2025
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2024/egusphere-2024-3038/egusphere-2024-3038-AC1-supplement.pdf
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-3038', Anonymous Referee #2, 17 Dec 2024
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Anam Khan, 18 Feb 2025
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2024/egusphere-2024-3038/egusphere-2024-3038-AC2-supplement.pdf
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Anam Khan, 18 Feb 2025
Peer review completion

