Dear authors,

I read through the manuscript and found that you have addressed the reviewers comments. However, I still have some minor comments/changes that you need to address to improve the manuscript before publication. I list them below:

1. You need to emphasize what is the urbanization effect. You mention land use change in your model sensitivity experiments. Does urbanization change the surface albedo, surface roughness, surface flux, ...etc? it need to be clearly stated.

2. Line 43, you say "The urban surface has a lower albedo". compared to what? to rural surface? why?

3. Line 60-61. "The aerosol indirect effect on clouds..." but here in the context you are talking about aerosol effect on fog, not on clouds.

4. WRF-Chem. Please give the full name when it is first time mentioned in the paper.

5. Line 151 "figure not show". I'd like you to show the figure and put it in supplement.

6. Line 168. "We assume that urbanization could have..." I'd change the sentence to something like "We hypothesize that ..."

7. Line 207. The first time "boomerang pattern" occurs please explain it. I know that you explain it later.

8. Line 244. "boundary layer and advection tendencies is equal to the LWC distribution". The sentence is not correct. how can tendencies equal to state (LWC). tendencies are changes of state (e.g., LWC).

9. Figures 10 and 11. here the unit of tendencies should be g/kg/time.

Dear Authors,

Thanks for addressing my comments in the revision. Two minor changes before publication:

1. Line 44. remove "do".
2. Line 81. change "change" to "changes".