Articles | Volume 26, issue 8
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-5293-2026
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A spectral perspective of the clear-sky OLR variability driven by ENSO
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- Final revised paper (published on 21 Apr 2026)
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This is a very interesting work that extends the diagnoses of the important OLR-Ts relationship in ENSO from broadband to spectral radiation. The development and application of a spectral kernel dataset is a notable strength (despite some questions detailed below). The paper shows that spectral data makes it possible to view the lagged OLR-TS relation with more clues relatable to the geophysical variables at the process level, which makes an important finding. I would recommend publication if the following comments were addressed.
The Introduction gives a good literature review to motivate this work, with a rather complete collection of relevant previous works, despite some misses, for example, Huang and Ramaswamy 2008 (https://doi.org/10.1029/2008GL034859) which was one of the earliest data-based diagnosis of spectral OLR-Ts relationship.
On the other hand, I found the paper does not make as strong connections with the previous works when discussing the results, which potentially impedes the revelation of the novelty or difference in the findings here. For example, much emphasis of the paper is on the lagged OLR-Ts relation, for which the spectral signatures are related to geophysical drivers (Figs 2/3 and texts around Line 200). However, these findings were similarly made based on broadband kernel-decompositions (e.g., Fig 3 of Kolly & Huang). Given the objective of this paper is to demonstrate the advantage of spectral information, such comparisons can be used to discuss what additional information is brought in by the spectral data.
A main, technical comment is on the kernels themselves, which are computed based on monthly profiles (Line 120) – a simplification known to introduce biases (e.g., see Huang and Ramaswamy 2009, https://doi.org/10.1175/2009JCLI2874.1). It remains to be demonstrated how well the kernels produced here explain the total spectral OLR changes. Although it is qualitatively discussed (Line 210), the biases are not quantified – better to show the residuals in closure tests of different lags. Another suggestion is to compare the kernels produced here to other kernels. For example, the broadband radiative sensitivity values spectrally integrated from the spectral kernels should reproduce broadband ERA5 kernels truthfully computed from instantaneous profiles (Huang and Huang 2023, https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-15-3001-2023). Such comparisons can be made with respect to maps of vertically integrated kernel values and with kernel-reproduced lagged OLR-Ts relationship (Fig 1). This would help provide a measure of the uncertainty in the results.
Given the results are exclusively for clear-sky. It is better to indicate this in the paper title.
Lastly, there are numerous grammatical errors. The English writing needs to be thoroughly proofed/edited.