Articles | Volume 26, issue 21
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-15333-2026
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Source-dependent organic aerosol hygroscopicity in eastern China: observational evidence for conditional enhancement under biomass-burning influence
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AR by Yunfei Wu on behalf of the Authors (21 Oct 2026)
This manuscript investigates the temporal variability and controlling factors of organic aerosol hygroscopicity (kOA) at a rural site in eastern China using humidified scattering measurements, aerosol size distributions, chemical composition for a closure study approach. The study addresses an important topic for understanding aerosol–cloud interactions and the representation of organic aerosol hygroscopicity. The manuscript presents an interesting result: bulk oxidation state alone does not adequately explain the observed variability in kOA, while biomass-burning influence is positively associated with kOA and appears to modify the relationship between oxidation state and hygroscopicity. The combination of statistical analysis and the January pollution episode provides useful observational evidence for this interpretation. Overall, I find the study scientifically interesting and suitable for publication after minor revision.
Specific comments:
1. better quantify kOA uncertainty. kOA is derived indirectly from bulk aerosol hygroscopicity using the ZSR framework and assumed hygroscopicities of inorganic components and refractory material. Since kOA is subsequently used as the central variable throughout the paper, it would be useful to provide at least a quantitative estimate of its uncertainty. For example, the observation size ranges of PNSD, ACSM, scattering growth, and AE are different, how this influence your analysis. During the drying process, volatile OA may loss, how much of this could influence the analysis of bulk kOA.
2. kOA is estimated by the k_inv subtracting other known k_components, as in eq.11. While, the direct impact of other components has been considered with this equation, the indirect impacts could also influence the kOA estimation, such as co-condensation. Previous studies have reported high impact of co-condensation on hygroscopic growth associated with chloride and nitrate particles. Please discuss how this may impact the uncertainty of kOA estimate.
3. The manuscript retrieves κ over several RH intervals but uses 80–90% RH as the representative value. Please briefly demonstrate that the main κOA–fbb relationship is not sensitive to the selected RH interval.
4. Fig.3. Around Jan. 22nd, there seems to be a gap of data in vol. frac. and just in vol. frac., and still with successful retrieval of kOA. Could you explain a bit more about this.