Articles | Volume 26, issue 19
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-13885-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Synthesis of the tethered balloon system and other TRACER campaign measurements elucidates aerosol property profiles
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-2245', Anonymous Referee #1, 19 Jun 2026
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Fan Mei, 25 Aug 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-2245', Anonymous Referee #2, 30 Jun 2026
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Fan Mei, 25 Aug 2026
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AR by Fan Mei on behalf of the Authors (25 Aug 2026)
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ED: Publish as is (22 Sep 2026) by Birgit Wehner
AR by Fan Mei on behalf of the Authors (22 Sep 2026)
The study by Mei et al. presents tethered balloon measurements complemented by surface-based and remote sensing observations and ancillary calculations conducted during the TRACER campaign, offering a highly valuable contribution to the field. The work builds upon previous research and draws on multi-platform measurements and derived data techniques. The detailed analysis effectively demonstrates the necessity of integrating distinct observation types to gain a more comprehensive understanding of the atmospheric processes involved. In particular, the aerosol concentrations and estimated CCN profiles provide new insights into the vertical distribution of aerosol properties as influenced by air mass origin. The extensive set of tethered balloon profiles enables the identification of distinct clusters and provide compelling statistics spanning the summer through early fall seasons. The case study from September 6–7 further illustrates the complexity of the atmospheric processes at play and reaffirms the critical role of complementary observational approaches in constructing a temporally and spatially coherent narrative. The authors demonstrate a clear awareness of the study's limitations, including the absence of vertical profiles of particle number size distribution and CCN measurements, the restricted temporal scope of the dataset, and the constraints on the tethered balloon's ability to operate above the boundary layer more frequently. Overall, the manuscript is of high scientific quality, is well-structured, and reads clearly. I recommend accepting the paper subject to minor revisions.
Minor comments:
The description of how the back trajectories are obtained might be better suited to the Data & Methodology section (lines 205-214), after which the results can be directly introduced in section 3.1 (from line 215 onward). A similar consideration might apply to the description of the Principal Component Analysis, which could also be relocated to the methods section.
Ground-based Scanning Mobility Particle Sizer, POPS, and CCN counter instruments appear to have been operated during the deployment, though the specific location remain unclear. For this study, it would be valuable to incorporate ground-based particle number size distributions from 10 nm to 3000 nm. Presenting monthly medians alongside 25th–75th percentile ranges would help visualize concentrations for each mode and assess seasonal variations, providing surface-level measurements representative of the tethered balloon deployment periods. A similar figure could be envisioned for CCN, enabling a direct comparison between measured and estimated CCN at the ground. Additionally, markers representing surface measurements should be displayed at the base of the profiles in Figure 4 for each cluster. If data are available, markers corresponding to measured CCN at the surface should also be added into Figure 7.
Can you please clarify how the flights were grouped into cluster in section 3.2? It appears that the air mass origin defining each cluster influenced entire days or extended periods, allowing individual flights to be categorized accordingly. However, as illustrated by the case study on September 6, a vertical profile was influenced by two distinct air masses associated with Custer 1 and 2. In the case of such decoupled air masses, how were the corresponding flights classified? Alternatively, given that decoupled profiles were rarely encountered during the deployment, were they excluded from Figure 4? Including a figure, table, or calendar displaying the tethered balloon flight times alongside their identified clusters would help visualize the temporal distribution of the air masses sampled throughout the deployment period.
Given the estimated CCN concentration is based on particle hygroscopicity, which is influenced by the volume fraction of each chemical species (Section 2.3), were the volume fractions adjusted to reflect the chemical composition observed aloft in the upper part of the profile on September 6 (Figure 9)? If so, did this yield a different κCCN value, and, consequently, distinct estimated CCN concentrations compared to those derived for the lower part of the profile? Alternatively, are changes in estimated CCN seen above 1000 m in Figure 8a solely attributable to variations in aerosol number concentration?
A compelling case is presented in Section 3.5.3 , differentiating between what might have been anticipated from the case study and the conditions that were actually observed by combining aerosols, and thermodynamic variables. The importance of integrating multiple observation types to fully capture such an event is clearly demonstrated. Could you elaborate further on the broader implications of these findings from a climate perspective? What insights does this case study offer within a larger climate context? What does it reveal about our understanding of the climate processes for this region?
Specific comments:
Line 105: “ a co-located microwave radiometer”, which model was used? Is there a publication associated with this instrument?
Line 141: Table 1. Would it be possible to replace the “instruments” column with two separate columns: one listing the name and model of each instrument, and a second one providing the manufacturer’s name? The current column includes some model names but does not consistently identify the manufacturers.
Line 168: For clarification, where were the ground-based SMPS, POPS, and CCN counter located? Were they deployed at La Porte?
Line 183: The calculation of CCN using the κ-Köhler theory assumes a uniform aerosol chemical composition from the surface up through the vertical column. Based on the meteorological profiles obtained from the tethered balloon, were any decoupled layers aloft identified during the campaign beside the case study? If so, do you have any statistics on their frequency of occurrence?
Line 190: Has the uncertainty introduced by the assumption of vertically uniform chemical composition been quantified in previous studies?
Line 236: Could you provide a reference describing the Principal Component Analysis methodology? This would be helpful for readers unfamiliar with this method, allowing them to access further details on the approach and potential examples of its application.
Line 280: Please rename Npops and Ncpc using the corresponding particle size ranges, N135-3000 N>10 in both the text and the figures.
Line 289: Subtle temperature differences are described at the surface between the clusters. Are these differences significant? Could they be explained by the topography and/or the wind direction? If these differences cannot be attributed to air mass origin, presenting the numbers without further context may be misleading to the reader.
Line 300: It seems that DMS has not been introduced before.
Line 316, Figure 4: Could the surface measurements be added at the bottom of the vertical profiles, using a distinct maker or other visual differentiation? It would make it insightful to display the tethered balloon observations and ground-based reference instrument measurements in the same figure. This comment is associated with previous general feedback on displaying surface-based observations.
Line 458: Could you specify the take-off and landing times for the flights on September 6 (and September 7)? Although the flight is represented in Figure 6 between 15:30 and 18:30, a reminder in the text would help the reader follow the discussion more easily.
Line 465: Have you examined 5-day back trajectories for September 6 and 7? Do the longer back trajectories support the assumption of long-range transport for the overlying aerosol layer? Additionally, have you considered visualizing the back trajectories with time on the x-axis, altitude on the y-axis, and an indication of whether the air mass traveled below or above the boundary layer during its transport? Potential supplementary figures presenting these analyses could further reinforce the narrative of the case study.
Line 475, Figure 8: Could the pressure levels in Figure 8c and 8d be converted to altitude? It would facilitate a more direct comparison with Figure 8a.
Line 520: CAPE has not been introduced before.
Technical comments:
Line 62: A period is missing between “and chemical composition” and “Airborne platforms”.
Line 397: When referring to Figures (a)–(c), do you mean Figures 7 and S2? Please clarify and ensure the figure references are correct.
Line 460: a period is missing between “increase with altitude" and "These trends”.
Line 471: Figure S8 is introduced before Figure S4 in the reading order. Please consider renumbering the supplementary figures to follow the sequential order in which they are first cited in the text.
Line 483 and following paragraphs: mb and hPa are used throughout. Please harmonize the units to SI standards by using hPa consistently throughout the manuscript.
Figure S6: The legend appears to be incorrect. Please update it with the appropriate and correct legend.