Articles | Volume 25, issue 20
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-13299-2025
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the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.Decadal tropospheric ozone radiative forcing estimations with offline radiative modelling and IAGOS aircraft observations
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Radiative forcing estimations based on IAGOS mean tropospheric ozone profiles for different regions are provided with offline radiative modelling, enabling to assess the impact of the variability of the vertical distribution of tropospheric ozone on the radiative forcing. The radiative forcing calculations are important and follow a novel approach, that permits to make the distinction between shortwave and longwave RF for the different regions.
General comments
The manuscript deserves publication in ACP, but there is a need for further specifications or more details on the dataset used, some results (obtained values) should be better explained in comparison with other, previous studies, and some sensitivity analyses could be additionally performed.
The manuscript builds further on the Gaudel et al., 2020 (named G20) study, but some more details of interest for the analysis described here should be given: what were the selection criteria for defining the 11 regions (see Table 1)? Are the observations spatially representative for the defined region? Also, in contrast to the G20 study, in which tropospheric ozone trends are calculated based on Quantile Regression on monthly anomalies, tropospheric ozone decadal changes in this manuscript are estimated from the mean tropospheric ozone profiles for different periods, as shown in Figure 2. However, those mean tropospheric ozone profiles might be very dependent on the spatial and temporal distribution of the IAGOS observations over the region or over the time period. For instance, one period might be dominated by summertime observations, while the other period is mainly characterized by wintertime flights. Or, the large majority of the flights might be situated in the beginning of a time period for one region, but at the end of the time period for another region, making the comparison between the regions less meaningful. Also, during the early time period, most profiles might be originating from take-off/landing at the west side of the region, for instance, but on the east side of the region for one of the later periods. On top of that, there is clear temporal sampling difference between the two earlier periods and the year 2019, which will impact the mean tropospheric ozone profiles over the region as well. The impact of possible differences of the spatial and temporal sampling on the different mean tropospheric ozone profiles should, as a consequence, at least be mentioned or even better, somewhat assessed.
Related to this, I would expect to see also the standard deviations of the mean tropospheric ozone profiles included in Fig. 2, in the average LTOC and UTOC in Figure 3, and in the LT, UT, and T ozone percent differences in Figure 4. Only the uncertainties for the worldwide TOC, LTOC and UTOC differences are provided in the text (page 6) and in Table 2, but it is not mentioned how these uncertainties are obtained (statistical mean over the different regions I assume?).
Based on the standard deviations of the mean tropospheric ozone profiles in Fig. 2, one could perform a sensitivity analysis of the RF estimations on the input mean tropospheric ozone profile for each region. Given the comment on how spatial and temporal representative the mean tropospheric ozone profiles for each region are, this RF estimation sensitivity analysis would add an extra feature to your findings.
The obtained (global) RF estimates are compared with previous studies, but not with the values obtained in G20 (Fig. 6) for exactly the same regions, and one of your 2 periods, but with a different method. Why is this comparison not been made? I found this rather strange. It also turns out that your average values are 60 to 90% larger than previous global average estimates with online models, but no explanations for this rather large offset have been given. The authors should go more in depth on this.
As many studies in the TOAR Special Issue pointed out, there was a decrease of tropospheric ozone column amounts during the COVID-19 period (and still continuing today). Have the authors not considered to quantify the impact of this effect on the RF forcing estimations by including a more recent year(s) than 2019 in their analysis? The authors should make reference to this (post-)COVID impact on tropospheric ozone and comment on their choice.
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