Articles | Volume 24, issue 21
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-24-12225-2024
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Tropospheric ozone precursors: global and regional distributions, trends, and variability
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This is a very detailed paper using a large amount of satellite, ozonesonde and modelling data to investigate the precursor drivers to the trends in total column tropospheric ozone between 2005-2019 on regional and global scales. The use of NO2, VOC, HCHO tropospheric column data is novel for this type of analysis, is within the scope of ACP and should be published subject to a slight restructure and few minor corrections.
General comments
It is unclear to me the relevance of the model analysis for different parts of the troposphere (Figure 5) if it isn’t referred to in the later interpretation of the measurements or in the conclusion. There is some clear parallel in the model analysis where the contribution and trends are separated by region (Figure 11) but can this be brought into the discussion more and perhaps section 3,3. (and Figure 5,11) be moved to after the measurements are presented (3.4.4, 3.4.5, 3.4.6, 3.4.7 ). A summary could then also include a discussion about which parts of the column are driving the trends in different regions of the globe, otherwise why include the model information? Are the model trends inline with the measurements? Please include some reference to the model findings in the precursor measurement discussions and conclusions.
The figures are a little confusing. It would make sense to use similar figures for each of the ozone precursors to allow easier interpretation. The discussion on CO trends includes more plots (including anomaly trend plots) for which the other precursor species there is a summary (also nice but maybe don’t need both). Can the plots used be the same for all species in sections 3.4.4, 3.4.5, 3.4.6, 3.4.7, either anomaly time-series or summary of anomalies?
As stated above Figure 5 perhaps relates more to the O3 discussion and should sit with Figure 11 as they are related (contribution to each part of the column from model and actual trend). Also perhaps Figure 4 should sit later with Figure 12 (see later specific points).
I think it is just a misunderstanding on my part but there should be a consistency with the time period that you are discussing, for the most part the time period 2005-2019 is shown but the main O3 trend figure 6 is possibly until 2021. There is also some reference to COVID years and this seems a bit out of place in the paper unless related to the above point?
Specific comments
Figure 2: Please include time range (2005-2019) in the figure caption.
Line 263: Use ‘peroxyl’ not ‘proxy’.
Line 272: Self referencing, can you choose other references for these fundamental reactions?
Lines 281-282 and Figure 4: NO2 column is stated to be decreasing in North America, Europe and Australia. Please include a reference for this relating to air pollution controls or alternatively Figure 4 should show the trend of NO2 rather than the mean if you are referring to it? The trends are shown later in Figure 12 so discussion about them should be there unless you have another reference for it?
Section 3.2, lines 290-295 generally needs more references when discussing sources from certain regions, not just ‘e.g.’ in brackets.
Figure 5: Model shows lower, middle, upper differences in precursor contribution. At this point the reader is interested in the trends within the column and whether any specific part of the troposphere has been increasing/decreasing over this time and in which regions, actually shown later in Figure 11. Can these be put together, perhaps in a later discussion?
Figure 6: What timescale are the trends over, 2005-2019 or 2005-2021?
Figure 7: Does the right plot show the ‘zonal mean trend’ of column depths or should the caption say ‘mean O3’ by latitude for different column depths for 2005-2019?
Figure 9: Can latitude of the observations be included on this plot?
Line 431: What is a partial column, is it defined?
Line 547: Include reference for biomass burning activity
Figure 16: This is a nice figure showing average CO anomalies in column mean 2005-2021 but with trends only until 2019 which is good. Can we have similar plots for NO2?
Figure 18, Summary of trends, for HCHO, why don’t we have this type of plot for CO?
Figure 24: Monthly anomalies of HONO from soil by region, please include trend data on these.