Articles | Volume 23, issue 22
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-23-14561-2023
© Author(s) 2023. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Bulk and molecular-level composition of primary organic aerosol from wood, straw, cow dung, and plastic burning
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- Final revised paper (published on 24 Nov 2023)
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Comment types: AC – author | RC – referee | CC – community | EC – editor | CEC – chief editor
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-1102', Yutong Liang, 12 Jun 2023
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Jun Zhang, 22 Sep 2023
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-1102', Anonymous Referee #2, 13 Jun 2023
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Jun Zhang, 22 Sep 2023
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RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-1102', Anonymous Referee #3, 14 Jun 2023
- AC3: 'Reply on RC3', Jun Zhang, 22 Sep 2023
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RC4: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-1102', Anonymous Referee #4, 20 Jun 2023
- AC4: 'Reply on RC4', Jun Zhang, 22 Sep 2023
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AR by Jun Zhang on behalf of the Authors (22 Sep 2023)
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ED: Publish as is (26 Sep 2023) by Arthur Chan
AR by Jun Zhang on behalf of the Authors (26 Sep 2023)
Zhang et al. used advanced mass spectrometry tools to measure the primary organic aerosol emitted from burning a variety of biomass fuels and plastic. They reported emission factors of gases and organic aerosol from burning these fuels, and used EESI-ToF measurement to identify unique tracers for different fuels with solid statistical analysis. The very new instrument, EESI-ToF, is used to characterize biomass burning particulate matter for the first time. Given the expanding use of EESI-ToF by the community, I think this work fits the scope of ACP. The manuscript is very clearly written. I recommend this work be published after some minor changes. I have the following comments for the authors to consider.
Line 21 in the abstract: From the main text, I found out that the organic gases were measured by a total hydrocarbon analyzer. However, when reading the abstract, I thought that they were measured by AMS or EESI. I would suggest the authors talk about how the hydrocarbon gases were measured before reporting these numbers.
Line 25 in the abstract: I don’t fully understand what this sentence means. The authors may want to rewrite it.
Line 112: Does “THC” here and in Equation 2 include methane?
Line 115&117: The mass resolution of the AMS instruments can be documented here. Same for the EESI-ToF below.
Line 138: In Equation 1, as I understand, MassX is the mass flux to the detector, and the authors are not attempting to quantify the compounds. Did the authors assume that all the compounds have the same response factor when making Figure 3?
Line 154: Would be great to document the (average) densities of aerosol in Table 1 or Table S1.
Line 204: The CHON ions are not included in Figure 1. Is it because they are negligible? Were they fitted in Pika?
Line 206: If the ions in the CxHyOz family in the plastic burning spectrum are coming from burning other fuels, then are PM, OM, and BC emission factors reported for burning plastic bags still reliable? Also, did the authors see CxHyOz in all four plastic bag burning experiments?
Line 219: What is the “f60 filter”? Is it 0.003?
Line 229: It might be good to label the PAH ions in the mass spectra (Figure S2).
Line 230 and 231: The authors may want to double-check what the ion with m/z 239 is. It should not be the parent ion of a hydrocarbon. Also, is the molecular formula of methylbenzofluoranthene C19H12? I think it should be C20H14. I am also curious whether the authors found a hint of retene in the AMS mass spectra because retene is usually a very abundant PAH emitted from burning conifers. It could have fragmented into smaller ions given its branched structure.
Line 262: Compounds with 18-20 carbon atoms could be resin acids (or their decomposition products in biomass burning), which are abundant in conifers. Also, in Line 286, I am curious that did the authors see emission of dehydroabietic acid (C20H28O2) from burning coniferous fuels?
Line 298: How is the correlation coefficient calculated? The authors may want to provide more details.
Line 409: I am convinced by this analysis that the p-value and FC methods can select tracer compounds from different biomass burning fuels very efficiently. However, in source apportionment studies, there are usually non-biomass burning PM sources. I would suggest that the authors compare the spectra of the biomass burning POA with OA from other common sources in their future study or verify these tracers in future field campaigns to make sure they are exclusively from biomass burning.
Minor Comments
Line 251-253: This seems to be an unfinished sentence.
Line 257: A redundant “%” should be removed.
Line 696: “markers denote”