Articles | Volume 26, issue 12
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-8893-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Aerosol Size Distribution and New Particle Formation in High Mountain Environments: A Comparative Study at Monte Cimone and Jungfraujoch GAW Stations
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Comment types: AC – author | RC – referee | CC – community | EC – editor | CEC – chief editor
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3842', Anonymous Referee #1, 23 Sep 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Martina Mazzini, 28 Nov 2025
- AC3: 'Reply on RC1', Martina Mazzini, 28 Nov 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3842', Anonymous Referee #2, 24 Sep 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Martina Mazzini, 28 Nov 2025
- AC4: 'Reply on RC2', Martina Mazzini, 28 Nov 2025
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AR – Author's response | RR – Referee report | ED – Editor decision | EF – Editorial file upload
AR by Martina Mazzini on behalf of the Authors (05 Jan 2026)
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EF by Polina Shvedko (09 Jan 2026)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (10 Jan 2026) by Imre Salma
RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (15 Jan 2026)
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (19 Jan 2026)
ED: Reconsider after major revisions (19 Jan 2026) by Imre Salma
AR by Martina Mazzini on behalf of the Authors (02 Mar 2026)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (03 Mar 2026) by Imre Salma
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (16 Mar 2026)
ED: Publish as is (24 Mar 2026) by Imre Salma
AR by Martina Mazzini on behalf of the Authors (31 Mar 2026)
Manuscript
The paper by Mazzini et al., investigates aerosol number size distributions (PNSD) and new particle formation (NPF) in the free troposphere (FT) using long-term measurements from two high-altitude observatories, Monte Cimone (2165 m, Italy) and Jungfraujoch (3580 m, Switzerland). The aim is to understand how aerosol formation, growth, and variability differ between the two sites. The results show that CMN is affected by more frequent and intense NPF and stronger PBL influence, while JFJ shows fewer NPF events, weaker growth despite more ultrafine particles. This is a good quality study that makes an important contribution to understanding aerosol formation in the free troposphere (FT). It is especially valuable because it contrasts two representative European high-altitude sites, applies three independent NPF classification methods and is based on a solid dataset consisting of two years of harmonized measurements. The paper also highlights how the condensation sink, cloud processes and boundary-layer strongly regulate NPF, providing a strong link between observations and their climate relevance.
The manuscript is well written and carefully developed. With the addition of some clarifications and details, it should be suitable for publication.
Specific comments:
Line 6: Sometimes “free troposphere (FT)” written in full, sometimes only “FT.” Suggest spell out first time and then “FT” for consistency.
Line 29: “The frequency of NPF events vary widely” → should be “varies widely.”
Line 59: “at 2165 m a.s.l..” double period. Should be “a.s.l.”
Line 63: the sentence “with this influence being most pronounced during summer daytime hours and diminishing at night, when the site predominantly reflects free tropospheric characteristics” is too long. I Suggest splitting into two sentences.
Line 63: “2.5–560nm” should have space: “2.5–560 nm.” Please check the entire document.
Line 97: Datasets coverage: “31.2% at CMN… In contrast, summer months show notable data gaps”. Could you provide the percentage of the different seasons for clarity?
Line 102: “originating from the nucleation of gas-phase precursors forming clusters approximately (∼1–2nm)”; parentheses awkward, just write “forming ∼1–2 nm clusters.”
Line 104: “Scaling factors were derived individually for each measured size distribution, and applied to all NAIS channels accordingly.” Please remove comma before “and.”
Line 107: “a common range of 2.5–560nm” should be “2.5–560 nm” (space before nm). Please check the entire document.
Line 149 and 150: Equation 2 formatting inconsistent: bracket notation N[2.5−7) inconsistent with earlier N2.5−7. Please harmonize notation.
Line 161-163: about RH threshold, you define out-of-cloud as RH < 94%, in-cloud as > 97%. But what about 94–97%? Please clarify explicitly.
Line 163: “Webcam images were used to further validate cloud presence”, could specify frequency or reliability (continuous, daily snapshots?).
Line 171: “(770−3)” should be “(770 cm−3)”.
Line 171: “across four defined mode” should be “modes.”
Line 206: “These categories reflect distinct stages of aerosol…….These modes reflect distinct stages of particle growth and transformation”, the two repeated sentences are redundant. Please rephrase them
Line 210: In Table 2, confidence intervals are in parentheses but not explained in caption. Please clarify.
Line 227: “These elevated ratios has been observed” should be “have been observed.”
Line 233: “One more possible explanation for the relative abundance…”, awkward phrasing, better “Another possible explanation…”
Line 243: Figure references: sometimes “Fig. X,” sometimes “Figure X.” Pick one style.
Line 265: “Ions also shows different behaviour between out-of- and in-cloud” should be “Ions also show different behaviour between out-of-cloud and in-cloud conditions”
Line 274: Table 3 should be harmonized (e.g., JFJ summer values missing ±).