Articles | Volume 26, issue 20
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-14577-2026
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Interacting effects of droplet number and ice formation processes on mixed-phase cold-air outbreak clouds
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- Final revised paper (published on 15 Oct 2026)
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-311', Anonymous Referee #1, 21 Feb 2026
- RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-311', Anonymous Referee #2, 24 Feb 2026
- AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-311', Xinyi Huang, 11 May 2026
- AC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-311', Xinyi Huang, 11 May 2026
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AR by Xinyi Huang on behalf of the Authors (11 May 2026)
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AR by Xinyi Huang on behalf of the Authors (02 Oct 2026)
The manuscript examines how mixed-phase cloud microphysical parameters influence macrophysical cloud properties during a marine cold-air outbreak over the Labrador Sea. Using two nested domains to represent upwind stratiform and downwind cumuliform cloud regimes, the authors conduct an extensive ensemble of simulations that systematically co-vary six microphysical input parameters. They employ Gaussian Process emulation to quantify relationships between input parameters and cloud-scale responses. The analysis identifies regime-dependent dominant parameters and demonstrates strong nonlinear interactions among them, underscoring the limitations of single-parameter sensitivity studies. The manuscript is clearly written, methodologically rigorous, and the analysis is comprehensive. I recommend publication following minor revisions.
Minor concerns
l. 21 – I wonder if there are any other studies that could be cited here?
ll. 54-59 Please also include Elsaesser et al. (2025) here.
Sec. 2.1 I wonder if the author could list cloud-top temperature (CTT) here (e.g., from a typical configuration). Assuming that CTT varies across configurations (e.g., I would expect stronger ice processes to produce lower/warmer cloud-tops, thereby preventing themselves) and if not too much work, perhaps CTT could even be added to Fig. 6?
Sec. 2.2.2 If aerosol was considered here, it would affect both N_d and N_inp; it is unclear if the chosen dynamic ranges for N_d and N_inp correspond well? I wonder if the authors could briefly quantify and explain.
Fig. 6 I’m surprised by the large cloud cover in the Cu regime. How do the authors define cloud cover?
Fig. 7/8 Is the small sensitivity of mprof in Sc-dominated regimes connected to the large cloud fraction (as well as small IWP) ?
Fig. 9 How should the reader interpret a greater TWP in the Cu-dominated regime under increased E_HM? While a LWP reduction make sense to me, I’m surprised to see an even stronger IWP increase.
Typos/Language
l. 342 “shown … show “
References
Elsaesser, G., M. van Lier-Walqui, Q. Yang, M. Kelley, A.S. Ackerman, A. Fridlind, G. Cesana, G.A. Schmidt, J. Wu, A. Behrangi, S.J. Camargo, B. De, K. Inoue, N. Leitmann-Niimi, and J.D.O. Strong, 2025: Using machine learning to generate a GISS ModelE calibrated physics ensemble (CPE). J. Adv. Model. Earth Syst., 17, no. 4, e2024MS004713, doi:10.1029/2024MS004713.