Articles | Volume 25, issue 22
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-16041-2025
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Larger than expected organic acid yields from the multi-generation oxidation of petrochemical alkenes
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3182', Anonymous Referee #1, 29 Aug 2025
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AR by Yuemeng Ji on behalf of the Authors (17 Oct 2025)
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ED: Publish as is (02 Nov 2025) by Benjamin A Nault
AR by Yuemeng Ji on behalf of the Authors (06 Nov 2025)
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This is an interesting work that investigates the multi-generation OH-initiated oxidation of 2-butene and its impact on the formation of organic acids in the petrochemical regions. Mainly it finds that larger than expected organic acid yields from the multi-generation oxidation of 2-butene in the petrochemical regions, originated from a novel pathway for acetic acid formation. It combines quantum calculation and photochemical box model simulation to deliver the critical thermodynamic and kinetic parameters for atmospheric models and advances our understanding of petrochemical-alkene chemistry. The manuscript is well organized and clearly written; its topic is timely and appropriate for publication.
My major comments related to the following aspect of the work:
Line 62: It would be helpful if the authors provide the atmospheric concentration of 2-butene to illustrate that 2-butene is abundance in petrochemical regions.
Lines 85–87: The manuscript states that multi-conformer transition-state theory (MC-TST) was used for “pathways involving multiple conformers,” but it is not clear how the authors identified which reaction channels possess multiple conformers. A brief description of the conformational search protocol and the energetic or structural criteria used to retain conformers (e.g., energy cut-off, rotational barriers, symmetry considerations) should be added to the Methods section. Besides, Line 136: DLPNO//M06-2X is not fully introduced anywhere.
It would be valuable to elaborate the reasons why the temperature range of 240-340 K is selected to calculate the kinetics. Does the negative correlation for the rate constant refer to the total k value? Since other values actually show a positive correlation, it would be helpful to elaborate on this further.
How sensitive are the calculated rate constants to variations in environmental parameters such as temperature, pressure, or the concentration of OH radical? An exploration of these dependencies under atmospherically relevant conditions would strengthen the applicability of the findings.
It is proposed that alkoxyl radicals (cis-RO and trans-RO) decompose into one CH3CHO and one CH3CHOH radical, whereas the Master Chemical Mechanism (MCM v3.3.1) assumes the direct cleavage yielding two CH3CHO. Please supply the transition-state geometry and corresponding barrier for the “two CH3CHO” pathway, and compare its rate constant with the CH3CHO + CH3CHOH pathway to justify why the latter is favored under the studied conditions.
Minor comments:
Line 71: “reactants” should be “Rs”;
Line 79: “Frisch 2009” should be “Frisch et al. 2009”;
Line 83: “tunneling” should be “tunnelling”;
Line 100: “the optimization” should be “the optimized structure”;
Line 115: Table S1 appears after Table S12 (Line 92), and Tables S2, S3 and S4 do not appear in the text.
Line 120: “trans-BU” should be “that of trans-BU”;
Line 122: the subscript of “cis-TS” should be “cis-TSadd1”;
Line 134: The reference “Sims et al., 1994” does not match the citation “Atkinson, 2000” in Figure 2;
Line 214: “Atchem-2” should be “Atchem 2”. Please check and revise accordingly.