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https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-14839-2025
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Spectral variability of gravity-wave kinetic and potential energy at 69° N: a seven-year lidar study
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- Final revised paper (published on 05 Nov 2025)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3267', Anonymous Referee #1, 08 Aug 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Mohamed Mossad, 12 Sep 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3267', Anonymous Referee #2, 17 Aug 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Mohamed Mossad, 12 Sep 2025
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ED: Publish as is (16 Sep 2025) by John Plane
AR by Mohamed Mossad on behalf of the Authors (25 Sep 2025)
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The work "Spectral variability of gravity-wave kinetic and potential energy at 69◦N: a seven-year lidar study" by Mossad and co-authors constitutes a comprehensive study of a unique dataset. The results are very relevant for this field of research and provide a reference for other studies and observations. The analysis is carefully done, and the presentation of results, the interpretation of measurements and the implications are well written. I have no major comments or questions, and recommend publication after minor corrections which are listed below.
Minor comments:
Abstract: In the abstract 2700 h of measurements and 100 soundings are mentioned, but the actual data used is less. Only summer and winter data are actually used in the study, e.g. from months Jan-Feb and Jun-Jul-Aug. They amount to 1091 h and 745 h according to Fig. 1 and Table 1. The actual number of used soundings is not given. I recommend to add these numbers to the abstract, and correct the number of soundings in line 742.
line 3: comprising --> comprises
line 65: add reference https://agupubs.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1029/2023GL104357
line 72: delete "will", delete "ever"
line 80: uniqueness of the ALOMAR location: also mention that it is situated at the coast and close to the Scandinavian mountain ridge
line 82: "only instrument in the world" change sentence to include https://agupubs.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1002/2016JD026368 and https://agupubs.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1029/2017JD027386
line 97: "measuring horizontal wind velocities for 30 years" is that true? The Fiedler and Baumgarten (2024) reference only gives one example from 2017. Suggest to add "the capability for wind measurements was added in xx" or similar
line 90: Sec. 2.4 --> Sec. 4.4
line 105: two 1.8 m telescopes --> two tiltable 1.8 m telescopes
line 131: 27.5 h --> 27.6 h
line 143: It is not clear what a Reynolds decomposition is. Please explain.
line 145: delete "and turbulence". I don't think this can be seen at 5 min resolution.
line 147: Is there a difference between removing a 12-h running mean and a sounding-length running mean because the sounding length differs from sounding to sounding?
line 150: "the problem of long vertical stripes" I didn't find that in the reference. What kind of problem is that, an instrumental problem?
line 258: delete "fine"
line 259/260: 5 min resolution and 1221 individual spectra for winter adds to 102 h. Isn't winter supposed to comprise 745 h?
line 260: "is much smoother" Is that also because of the top-down integration?
line 283: what is "p" in the equation "b approx pd approx 1/6"?
Fig. 3: I suggest to add the dates in the legend to make clear that those are single cases and not winter and summer averages
line 332: upper stratosphere --> mid stratosphere?
line 345: measurements in (Hertzog.. --> measurements by Hertzog...
Table 2: For winter Epot energy a digit is missing for the uncertainty ("1"), in line 425 it is "1.4"
line 604: rabidly --> rapidly
line 676: "we need to first" --> "we first need to"
line 677: delete "do"
line 683: change "an artefact of" to "it is not a property of long-wavelength motions only, but.."?
line 707-713: this sentence is too long
check the use of brackets around citations: at least in l. 63, l. 64, l. 345, l. 350, l. 613, l. 662, l. 667 \citep should be changed to \citet