Articles | Volume 25, issue 21 
            
                
                    
            
            
            
        https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-14449-2025
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                Towards an improved understanding of the impact of clouds and precipitation on the representation of aerosols over the Boreal Forest in GCMs
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- Final revised paper (published on 03 Nov 2025)
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 - Preprint (discussion started on 21 Mar 2025)
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        - RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-721', Anonymous Referee #1, 10 Apr 2025
 - RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-721', Anonymous Referee #2, 30 May 2025
 - RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-721', Anonymous Referee #3, 14 Jul 2025
 - AC1: 'Response to reviewers', Sini Talvinen, 22 Aug 2025
 
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                AR: Author's response | RR: Referee report | ED: Editor decision | EF: Editorial file upload
            
        
                        AR by Sini Talvinen  on behalf of the Authors (22 Aug 2025)
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                        ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (22 Aug 2025) by Ann Fridlind
                    
                
                
                            RR by Anonymous Referee #3 (09 Sep 2025)
                                
                                
                
                                
                        
                    
                        ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (15 Sep 2025) by Ann Fridlind
                
                            
                            
                          
                    
                
                        AR by Sini Talvinen  on behalf of the Authors (24 Sep 2025)
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                        ED: Publish as is (24 Sep 2025) by Ann Fridlind
                
                    
                
                        AR by Sini Talvinen  on behalf of the Authors (25 Sep 2025)
                    
                
                    
                    
                    
                    
The authors compare output from two general circulation models that were nudged to reanalysis conditions against aerosol measurements taken at a boreal forest ground site. The analysis includes both Eulerian and Lagrangian perspectives. The latter is used to infer if aerosol sinks and sources are plausible in both models. The manuscript is of great relevance and should be published after major revisions.
Major concerns
I think the manuscript (not considering appendix and supporting material) is too long and should be more concise in style. A good example is the “Conclusion and Outlook” section, which spans over 2 pages. While there are key conclusions in this section, it is hard to find them when mingled with discussion material. Instead, the authors could split this section into a conclusion sections (as also suggested by the ACP guidelines) that is very concise and an outlook (or else discussion) section. In the same manner, the authors should attempt to shorten sections 3-5, by perhaps moving discussion-style material to a dedicated discussion section.
Throughout the Lagrangian analysis the authors mostly show median values. I’m wondering how large the interquartile range is and whether the main conclusions are affected when considering this range.
Minor concerns
l. 57 Please define “sectional approaches”.
ll. 428ff (and Fig. 3). Why is rainfall rate increasing closer to the site?
ll. 805ff. Is there a chance that “in-cloud” and “clear-sky” groups correspond to very different regions (with unique local aerosol sources)?
Typos/style
ll. 923-924 Please check this sentence.
l. 943 “extremeties”