Articles | Volume 25, issue 20
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-13327-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under
the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.Application of PRIM for understanding patterns in carbon dioxide model-observation differences
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-341', Anonymous Referee #1, 31 Mar 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Tobias Gerken, 17 Jul 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-341', Anonymous Referee #2, 06 May 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Tobias Gerken, 17 Jul 2025
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AR by Tobias Gerken on behalf of the Authors (17 Jul 2025)
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (11 Aug 2025) by Patrick Jöckel

AR by Tobias Gerken on behalf of the Authors (21 Aug 2025)
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ED: Publish as is (02 Sep 2025) by Patrick Jöckel
AR by Tobias Gerken on behalf of the Authors (09 Sep 2025)
Main comment
This study investigates synoptic weather system related to CO2 transport by applying PRIM to airborne observations from the ACT-America summer 2016 and winter 2017 campaigns, and aims at quantifying the WRF-Chem model uncertainties associated with specific atmospheric characteristics to improve atmospheric inversion processes.
The present study appears to be relevant, novel and well within the scope of ACP. However, I believe that some improvements could be made. They are summarized here, and they are further expanded in the detailed/line-by-line comments:
Detailed/line-by-line comments
Line 15: The introduction is very simple and clear, covers the issue at hand effectively and states the study's goal effectively. I do suggest only a couple of changes in this section.
Line 56-57: Explanation of what OCO-2 v9 MIP is should be included here.
Line 72: The method subsections 2.1 and 2.2 seem good, but 2.3 needs quite some adjustments in my opinion, as many concepts are not explained clearly.
Line 87: “To facilitate our analysis, we exclusively use data from level-leg flight segments”. Why would this facilitate the analysis?
Line 101-102: “with unusually high [CO2], indicative of CO2 point sources, ([CO2]>430ppm)”. Could this be justified better? How are you sure that you are not canceling any actual feature when excluding these kind of outliers?
Line 111: As far as I know, residuals are usually defined as "observed minus modelled", rather than the other way around
Line 119: Please review this subsection carefully, as terms here appear to be used interchangeably and could result in some confusion.
Line 121-123: “Simple rules … higher than usual frequency.” This sentence is not clear. What are "simple rules about input variables"? What does it mean that a "designated variable of interest occurs at a higher than usual frequency"?
Line 123-125: “PRIM rules … (Hadka et al., 2015)” This sentence seems a little bit off here, and I suggest to move it later in the section.
Line 126-130: “The PRIM … inside the box.” This is not very clear - what does higher mean value mans? What is a target?
Line 143-149: This example makes things more clear than the explanation what was provided before, so I'd try to restructure the section to present this earlier in order to explain what PRIM is - I also suggest using this toy example to clarify definitions (e.g. writing here in parentheses what is a target/variable of interest/frequency, and so on).
Line 156: Is the threshold 0.75 arbitrary? While sounding reasonable, this choice should be justified.
Line 171-172: One concern of mine here is related to how the ACT dataset is handled. Shouldn't the PRIM classification capabilities be tested on an external dataset? i.e. determine the parameter subspace for each classes on a subset of the ACT dataset ("calibration/training dataset"), and then apply those rules to the rest of the data and see how they match with the expert designations ("validation dataset" – whose results should be displayed in Figure 3 and referred in this section).
Line 268-272: I'd rather say that PRIM's inability is in line with the hypothesis that upper tropospheric air represents background conditions. The way it was phrased makes it seem like PRIM’s inability discern frontal warm and cold sectors is a proof for upper tropospheric air representing background conditions (which cannot be proven this way and would need more evidences).
Typos/unclear sentences
Line 2: “of of”
Line 10-12: “Using the PRIM … are less typical.” Unclear sentence
Line 12: “that that”
Line 60-62: “model … (Gerken et al., 2021).” Unclear sentence
Line 65: Useful tool?
Line 156-166: “There is notably are much larger”?
Line 191: “1% 1%”
Line 250: “to to”
Line 258-260: “While PRIM … by PRIM” Unclear sentence.
Figures and tables
Figure 1: y-axis labels overlap
Figure 4: I think it would be better if y-axis limits were consistent throughout ABL-LFT-HFT
Figure S1: figure resolution should be higher
Figure 5 and figure 6: a plot like the one in figure 6 feels more useful than the one figure 5 (which could be as well SI in my opinion). Is there a reason why this is just ABL and not LFT and HFT?