Articles | Volume 25, issue 18
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-10587-2025
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Dust pollution substantially weakens the impact of ammonia emission reduction on particulate nitrate formation
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AR by Yunjiang Zhang on behalf of the Authors (06 Jul 2025)
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This study conducted field measurements of atmospheric aerosol and gaseous species across three urban sites in Eastern China, by employing an integrated approach combining aerosol thermodynamic modeling with machine learning techniques to evaluate the role of dust in modulating aerosol pH and its subsequent effects on nitrate formation. The findings demonstrate that dust composition and ammonia variability constitutes the dominant control on aerosol pH. During dust storm, elevated concentrations of non-volatile cations significantly enhanced aerosol alkalinity, thereby promoting particulate nitrate formation. These processes simultaneously diminished the sensitivity of the aerosol pH to ammonia emission reductions. Overall, the manuscript is well written and the results are valuable to the literature. While the conclusions provide valuable insights, several aspects warrant further clarification.
General comments:
1. Lines 98-99: Please specify the effective particle size capture range of the wet sample, and the corresponding collection efficiency.
2. Lines 233-236: Is sulfate volatile? It could simply be because the fraction of nitrate decreased, causing that of sulfate to increase relatively. In addition to the effects of atmospheric dilution and dispersion, could the differences in dust composition from various sources also play a role?
3. Line 290: What scientific rationale underlies the specific concentration thresholds (0, 0.7, 3 ug m-3) adopted for classification purposes?
4. Lines 297-299: While the impact of Ca2+ is demonstrated, were other cations (e.g., Fe and Mn) similarly evaluated?
5. Figure 6: In Figure 6b, there is no change in aerosol pH when the sulfate concentration is below approximately 5 µg m⁻³. Could you please clarify the reason for this?
6. Lines 357-358: Any reason? Is it due to the different composition of the dust or different environmental conditions?
7. Lines 370-371: The interpretability of the random forest model's predictions requires further clarification. For reductions ranging from 0% to 50%, do the concentrations of each species remain within the observed range after reduction? If not, the random forest model may fail to accurately capture the relationship between the predictors and the dependent variables, potentially leading to misinterpretations.
Technical comments:
1. Figure 7: Please add into the figure typical pH values for non-dust periods for better clarity.
2. Lines 258-260: Add “for example” before this sentence to improve flow.
3. Please standardize all chemical notation with proper subscript/superscript formatting.