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https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-24-9777-2024
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Understanding the trends in reflected solar radiation: a latitude- and month-based perspective
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The authors use Edition 4.2 CERES EBAF product and analyze top-of-atmosphere albedo separated by northern and southern hemisphere. They show that albedos are decreasing about the same rate for both hemispheres. They also separate the contribution by atmosphere, surface, and clear- and cloudy-sky using the method used in Stephens et al. They also separate by 10-degree zones and analyze annual contributions by 10-degree zone. In addition, they analyze 10-degree zonal contributions separated by climatological month. Furthermore, they use AVHRR, MERRA-2, ERA5, and ISCCP data and compare correlation coefficient, mean and RMS difference of hemispherical with the albedo derived form EBAF.
The authors cite large amounts of published studies on hemispherical albedo symmetry. The authors analyze southern and northern hemispheres’ surface and atmosphere contributions. However, the result of the zonal analysis is mainly that higher land albedo in the northern hemisphere present in the midlatitude is compensated by clouds over southern ocean, which was pointed out in earlier studies (e.g. Stephens et al. 2015). Hemispherical albedo trends were analyzed by Datseries and Stevens (2021). Therefore, most of their results are reproduction of the results of earlier studies. Among three main results discussed in the discussion and summary session, only 3), which is the result of the comparison of different products, might be new. But the result is not essential in understanding the hemispherical albedo symmetry. In addition, as far as I know, AVHRR and ISCCP data products were not used in analyzing hemispherical albedo symmetry in earlier studies. Therefore, the motivation of the comparison is not clear. New knowledge added by this study is not significant enough to worth publication. However, because the extensive coverage of earlier studies, there might be a path forward. Because of the good coverage of earlier studies on this subject, I suggest converting this manuscript to a review paper.
My further comments follow.
Line 69-70. The location of ITCZ shifting with season is known before 2007.
Line 70-71 There are many places that sentences are either awkward or do not make sense. In addition to this sentence, the sentence on line 84-85, line 290 “contribution rate”, line 294 “molecular part of Eq. (14), line 360 (10a)-1 awkward units, for example.
Line 80 the authors used “oblique pressure activity” several places in the manuscript. I think what they mean is mid-latitude baroclinic low pressure systems or synoptic systems, but I am not sure.
Line 88-90. If the authors are telling that aerosols increase deep convective clouds, could you cite papers?
Line 97-98. I do not think that available data limit studying hemispherical albedo symmetry. The authors might mean studying how the symmetry changes with time?
Line 139 Why do the authors mention filtered radiance here?
Section 2.2.1 is largely the reproduction of earlier study.
Equation (12) Weighting by clear and cloud fraction is missing in the equation.
Equation (14) area weighted mean is probably sufficient instead of introducing the equation.
Equation (20). Generally, we do not put variables with different units in an equation. Correlation coefficient is a non-dimensional number while mean and RMS have units.
Figures are generally too small to see the details.
References
Datseris, G., & Stevens, B. (2021). Earth’s albedo and its symmetry. AGU Advances, 2, e2021AV000440. https:// doi.org/10.1029/2021AV000440
Stephens, G. L., D. O’Brien, P. J. Webster, P. Pilewski, S. Kato, and J.-l. Li (2015), The albedo of Earth, Rev. Geophys., 53, 141–163, doi:10.1002/2014RG000449.