Articles | Volume 23, issue 22
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-23-14577-2023
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Two years of satellite-based carbon dioxide emission quantification at the world's largest coal-fired power plants
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- Final revised paper (published on 24 Nov 2023)
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AR by Daniel Cusworth on behalf of the Authors (09 Oct 2023)
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The authors have presented CO2 emissions from power plants detected from PRISMA and OCO-3. PRISMA observations with high spatial resolution detect the plume of individual power plants. This is very impressive. The topic is very interesting. However, some major issues are needed to be addressed before publication.
Major comments:
The structure of the paper still needs to be improved. Sometimes it is not easy to follow. The study shows the results of PRISMA, but the main advantages of using PRISMA and IME are not very clearly emphasized.
The authors have written a nice introduction of studies using OCO2 and OCO3 but the introduction related to PRISMA is only one line. In section 2.2 the PRISMA instrument is introduced here. Detail information (spatial resolution, overpass time, etc.) of the instrument is missing. Please add more background information about PRISMA and studies using PRISMA.
Please check the method section. There is no section 2.1. The numbering of subsection started directly from section 2.2. Please provide a subsection to introduce some datasets used in the study, such as the GEM dataset, CEMS dataset.
L185, the calculation of L is assuming that the plume is square. But in reality, not many plumes are square. I assume that the L is underestimated here. This will also affect the uncertainties of emissions.
I am wondering if there are any validation of the xco2 retrievals of PRISMA. Is there any bias of the xco2 retrievals? How much is the uncertainty? For comparison with OCO2 and OCO3, are there any systematic biases among the retrieval products?
When compare IME and the Gaussian Plume method for OCO-3, we clearly see that the estimates from IME clustered together (Figure 5). This means that the sensitivity of IME for OCO-3 is lower than the Gaussian Plume method. Lower resolution of OCO-3 limits the number of plume pixels. This point should be added when you described the discrepancy between IME and the Gaussian Plume method.
Please add DOI number in references
Minor comments:
L31 ‘better understand’ than what? Compare to which part? Please make it more specific.
L112, ‘non-overlapping’. Non-overlapping with what? Please specify it here.
About table 1, please add some explain in the manuscript about why the plume detections are lower than the clear-sky observations. There are many cases that having clear-sky observation and plume detections, but there shows ‘NA’. The explanation is not very clear in the text.
L167 Please specify that the calculation of background is described in section 3.2
L169 ‘one-pixel dilation filter’, do you have reference for this filter?
L186-187: The Ueff calculated from Varon et al. (2018) is for methane plume observations with GHGsat instrument. Is the relationship also suitable for CO2?
L283, ‘210 scenes, 104 were determined.’ Please explain more clearly why there are fewer determined.
L 306, it would be better to mention one or two sentence of the ‘logistic regression classification function’ cited from (Fan et al., 2008).
L446-448: Please check the sentence and rewrite it. You mentioned the Adani plant two times.
Lin 448-451: The uncertainties of PRISMA look very low here: only 16%. You explain that the discrepancy is caused by the uncertainty. The main discrepancy of emission rates between PRISMA and OCO3 is that there are more emission sources mixing in the detected plume of OCO3. We see this in Figure 7b that the XCO2 enhancement around red point is among the CO2 plumes of all power plants and industrial area in Mundra. Because OCO3 has coarse spatial resolution, and this is an important reason for the difference. This should be mentioned here.
L 451-452 Validation won’t reduce the uncertainties but only to better quantify the uncertainties.
Figure 7 Please add the coordinate in each sub-figure to help readers to see the scale of each map.