Articles | Volume 23, issue 21
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-23-13735-2023
© Author(s) 2023. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Mechanisms controlling giant sea salt aerosol size distributions along a tropical orographic coastline
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- Final revised paper (published on 03 Nov 2023)
- Preprint (discussion started on 07 Jul 2023)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-1387', Anonymous Referee #1, 26 Jul 2023
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Katherine L. Ackerman, 03 Sep 2023
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-1387', Anonymous Referee #2, 01 Aug 2023
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Katherine L. Ackerman, 03 Sep 2023
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AR by Katherine L. Ackerman on behalf of the Authors (04 Sep 2023)
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (05 Sep 2023) by Lynn M. Russell
AR by Katherine L. Ackerman on behalf of the Authors (07 Sep 2023)
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ED: Publish as is (08 Sep 2023) by Lynn M. Russell
AR by Katherine L. Ackerman on behalf of the Authors (25 Sep 2023)
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The manuscript “Mechanisms controlling giant sea salt aerosol size distributions along a tropical orographic coastline” presents measurements of sea salt aerosols, including giant and ultragiant particles, from a novel device both on the coast and in the open ocean. Notable differences in the overall SSA concentrations are noted between the two sites, as are differences in the SSA-SD shape parameters and vertical profiles. Some of the mechanisms are illustrated by trajectory tracking in a WRF run of the area.
In my opinion, this is a great study and a very well-written manuscript. It is well-referenced and clear, and a lot of details were attended to properly. It also provides very reliable measurements of a data-scarce topic: SSA and giant particles in particular, but also comparing coastal to open ocean conditions. A lot remains to be understood about how universal the SSA-SD shape parameters are, and this study does the field a service by so clearly demonstrating some of the key differences that can occur. I only have a few very minor points for the authors to consider, but otherwise think that this would make a great contribution to ACP.
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12: Figure 4: It would be helpful if this figure had a panel “c” which showed the average RH profile that these are based on
13: Line 410 (or thereabouts): Somewhere at the end of this section I think it’s important to point out the relatively simple way of doing the trajectory simulations. I think it’s totally appropriate for what the authors are trying to do, but the treatment of turbulence in particular is only very crudely represented. I think the authors do a good job of only drawing conclusions which are supported by this method – I just think that a brief 1-sentence reminder at the end of the processes (especially turbulence) which were left out and could lead to significant differences in some of the details.
14: Lines 435-436: Elsewhere it’s spelled “Hawai’i”