Articles | Volume 22, issue 11
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-22-7417-2022
© Author(s) 2022. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Australian wildfire smoke in the stratosphere: the decay phase in 2020/2021 and impact on ozone depletion
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- Final revised paper (published on 09 Jun 2022)
- Preprint (discussion started on 18 Jan 2022)
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RC1: 'Comment on acp-2021-1097', Anonymous Referee #1, 09 Feb 2022
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Kevin Ohneiser, 11 Apr 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on acp-2021-1097', Anonymous Referee #2, 20 Feb 2022
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Kevin Ohneiser, 11 Apr 2022
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AR by Kevin Ohneiser on behalf of the Authors (11 Apr 2022)
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ED: Publish as is (03 May 2022) by Yves Balkanski
AR by Kevin Ohneiser on behalf of the Authors (12 May 2022)
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The manuscript presents very interesting long-term observations of the stratospheric wildfire smoke event captured in the Southern Hemisphere. They present the geometrical, optical, and microphysical properties of the smoke layer. The decay behaviour of such a stratospheric perturbation, and the smoke impact on the ozone hole over Antarctica were discussed.
The dataset is interesting, and the manuscript is well written. The manuscript is worthwhile to be published, after addressing all the points raised by reviewers.
Please see below some suggestions and comments:
l17, please specify the wavelength of ext.
l79, does Polly continuously measure the Raman signals?
l226, “This is in agreement with the CALIOP observations.” please specify.
l234-237, please check and make this sentence clearer.
l295, “on most of the days”, specify the period referred.
l307, the CORAL AOT values are only for the smoke layer?
l314, “total AOT”, please specify the total AOT here.
l535, please define PSC.
Table2 does the std here present the time variation? what is the number of profiles used for the calculation? What about provide additional values for the intense period, e.g. only for 1/2020
Fig.1-2 add lat lon in fig.1a and fig.2a
Fig7. Maybe provide some uncertainty bars in the figure.
Fig. 8, there are negative PLDR values shown in c. Maybe use some thresholds (e.g. SNR or bsc value) to screen out too noisy data.