Dear Author:

You have attended to all of the issues raised by the referees and, since both were in favour of publication, I hereby approve the manuscript for full publication in ACP. In the process of finalising the manuscript, I suggest you consider the following small items:

There are spaces missing between references in lists of in-text citations
Some of the references in the bibliography have journal names given in full, some in abbreviated form (but are missing periods to indicate abbreviated words); please make consistent
The ‘maps’ under Fig 1 are hard to see; maybe use actual maps or plans rather than ‘satellite’
Some of the text on axis labels are quite small and hard to see, e.g. Figs 4, 7

Thank you for using ACP for your publication.

Best wishes,

Bill Sturges