Articles | Volume 26, issue 1
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-703-2026
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Ammonia emissions and depositions over the contiguous United States derived from IASI and CrIS using the directional derivative approach
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- Final revised paper (published on 15 Jan 2026)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-725', Anonymous Referee #1, 02 Jul 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Zitong Li, 03 Sep 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-725', Anonymous Referee #2, 24 Jul 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC2', Zitong Li, 03 Sep 2025
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AR by Zitong Li on behalf of the Authors (30 Sep 2025)
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AR by Zitong Li on behalf of the Authors (23 Dec 2025)
The authors clearly demonstrate the significance and necessity of improved NH₃ flux estimates, and the results present interesting spatial and seasonal patterns that are valuable to the community. However, the methodological description is currently insufficient and relies too heavily on briefly reproducing elements from Ayazpour et al. (2024) without providing enough self-contained derivation or detailed explanation. To ensure clarity and reproducibility, I strongly recommend expanding Section 2 with a more thorough presentation of the directional derivative framework, explicit definitions of all key variables and terms, and clearer justification for the assumptions made. Addressing these issues will greatly strengthen the scientific rigor and standalone value of the manuscript. Furthermore, emissions are presented in quite some detail, but the deposition fluxes seem to draw the short straw. The lack of dry-deposition measurements of course does not help in being able to make a nice comparison, but some discussion or comparison with past modelled results would increase the value of the deposition results. Subsequently linking those results to for example critical load limits could greatly improve the overall value of the manuscript and enhance the impact of all the work that is already performed.
Main comments:
According to Ayazpour et al. (2024), a stricter maximum emission threshold is necessary for fitting DD_chem than for DD_topo. Could the poor fitting performance of the chemical loss term (line 247) be related to an insufficiently strict threshold? Please clarify and discuss whether further refinement of the X and k estimates is planned.
Additionally, the fit seems to have been performed on the whole of the CONUS, whereas lifetime will vary strongly depending on the local pollution levels of other species (produced hno3/h2so4). A switch to locally varying fits would make sense from a chemistry point of view.
Alternatively, the authors could add an Alinea what the expected lifetime to chemistry is for typical hno3/h2so4 concentrations, and discuss from that point of view if chemistry is important or not. In its current form it’s not convincing.
Minor edits/comments:
Abstract L29: “atmospheric” instead of “atmosphere”
L45-46, I’d rephrase this sentence. Spatially the emissions seem to align, but seasonally and in amplitude they do not.
L74: a few hours is on the low end of the model and measurement estimates, mostly derived from direct fits on satellite data, which are expected to bias low. Estimates of 8-12 or up to 24 hours seems more reasonable based on literature.
L84: Quite a recent reference, the relation between volatilization and environmental conditions was known much before this point.
L103-105: Quite the claim when later analysis mostly focuses on monthly or longer temporal resolutions.
L124 onward: add the observational periods of each satellite after each satellite name, this will make it easier for the reader to follow what satellite is in orbit when.
Line 182-185: Essentially you are gap-filling the record, but I fail to see the basis for just inflating the pixel size without any smart input of additional data. I can imagine this type of gap-filling introducing stronger or weakening gradients in regions with very localized sources and/or very common wind directions. Please add a few words on potential effects on gradients.
Figure 1: Whats going on with the few outlier months in the CrIS and IASI records, are these specific periods? And what does excluding these do for your results?
Line 313-315: what about the instrument detection limit?
Section 4.2: or in discussion: I miss a discussion on the potential effects of instrument/product bias changing over time, and the expected impact compared to the increasing trends you observed here.
References:
Ayazpour, Z., Sun, K., Zhang, R., & Shen, H. (2025). Evaluation of the directional derivative approach for timely and accurate satellite-based emission estimation using chemical transport model simulation of nitrogen oxides. Journal of Geophysical Research: Atmospheres, 130, e2024JD042817. https://doi.org/10.1029/2024JD042817