Articles | Volume 26, issue 10
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-26-6763-2026
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A process-oriented analysis of the summertime diurnal cycle of precipitation and diabatic heating over China in three reanalyses
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AR by Xiaocong Wang on behalf of the Authors (06 May 2026)
This manuscript evaluates how ERA5, JRA-55, and MERRA-2 represent the summertime diurnal cycle of precipitation (DCP) over China, using IMERG and CMORPH as observational references. The authors diagnose regional differences in precipitation phase and amplitude and relate them to diabatic heating (Q1/Q2), subgrid-scale transport proxies, cloud vertical structure, vertical velocity, and CAPE versus dCAPE over three representative regions (TP, SECN, SCB). The process-oriented framing is a strength and could be useful for understanding reanalysis behavior and guiding model development. However, key methodological details are missing for time handling, event selection, and the derivation of several diagnostics. Because several conclusions hinge on phase offsets of only a few hours, these gaps limit reproducibility and weaken the robustness of the physical interpretation.
Major comments:
1. Several highlighted phase differences are only a few hours, comparable to the sampling intervals of some products (for example, JRA-55 3-hourly precipitation and 6-hourly pressure-level fields). The manuscript provides temporal resolution information and a generic Fourier description, but it does not document the actual implementation used to produce the diagnostics. Please explicitly document:
Required robustness check:
2. Table 1 reports substantially different numbers of selected events across datasets, implying that event days are selected independently for each dataset. If so, composites of heating/cloud/omega may reflect different synoptic populations rather than purely differences in modeled physics.
Please clarify whether the same dates are used across datasets. To strengthen attribution, add a sensitivity composite where event days are defined using IMERG (and/or CMORPH) and then applied to all reanalyses on the same dates.
3.The claim that convective precipitation in ERA5 and MERRA-2 follows CAPE more closely while JRA-55 aligns better with dCAPE is plausible but currently qualitative. Please add quantitative metrics (for each region and dataset), such as:
Also, briefly document (with citations) the relevant convective trigger/closure characteristics in the forecast models underlying each reanalysis, to support the triggering interpretation.
Minor comments:
Line 40-45: revise “continue still show” to “continue to show” or “still show”.
Line 115-120: Change “Specially,” to “Specifically,”.
Line 115-120: Change “such the Sichuan Basin” to “such as the Sichuan Basin”.
Data availability: “IMERGE” should be “IMERG”.