Articles | Volume 25, issue 24
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-18639-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
PISTON and CAMP2Ex observations of the fundamental modes of aerosol vertical variability in the Northwest Tropical Pacific and Maritime Continent's Monsoon
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- Final revised paper (published on 19 Dec 2025)
- Preprint (discussion started on 12 Aug 2025)
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Comment types: AC – author | RC – referee | CC – community | EC – editor | CEC – chief editor
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-2605', Anonymous Referee #1, 08 Sep 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Jeffrey Reid, 30 Oct 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-2605', Anonymous Referee #2, 16 Oct 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Jeffrey Reid, 30 Oct 2025
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AR by Jeffrey Reid on behalf of the Authors (30 Oct 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (03 Nov 2025) by Geraint Vaughan
RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (12 Nov 2025)
ED: Publish as is (12 Nov 2025) by Geraint Vaughan
AR by Jeffrey Reid on behalf of the Authors (17 Nov 2025)
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This paper contains a lot of information that will be useful for researchers applying further analysis. The manuscript did read more like a Measurement Report than a scientific analysis aiming to move the research frontier forward, and I would suggest that the manuscript be reclassified as a Measurement Report. From a science point of view, I would have wished for more assessment of why the aerosol remains as low in the atmosphere as the authors found, and, how common that is. I did not see much discussion of other campaigns, including those associated with NASA, that also have documented long-range boundary layer aerosol transport. NASA ORACLES/DOE LASIC certainly did (see ACP/AMT special issue on the southeast Atlantic), and perhaps NASA SEAC4RS did too. I had trouble taking away what new scientific insights were gleaned. But just reframing the document as a Measurement Report would remove this additional weight from the authors and that would be fine as the collected data should be published to better familiarize the larger world with it. I would also suggest the authors read through the manuscript and look for ways to condense the language, as at 50 pages for the main text, it is quite long.
smaller comments:
1. URLs sprinkled throughout the manuscript belong in the data availability section I believe, not in the main text.
2. A larger map outlining the campaign location would be nice. Not everyone knows where Luzon or Manila are, or the various Seas.
3. The Hilario et al paper is referenced so often that it would be nice to see it briefly summarized in the Intro. I presume it did not include any HSRL analysis.