Articles | Volume 25, issue 22
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-25-17027-2025
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The global importance of gas-phase peroxy radical accretion reactions for secondary organic aerosol loading
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AR by Alfred Mayhew on behalf of the Authors (06 Nov 2025)
The authors present a comprehensive and methodologically robust study assessing the global contribution of RO₂ + RO₂ accretion reactions to secondary organic aerosol (SOA) formation using the GEOS-Chem chemical transport model. By integrating updated theoretical understanding and incorporating new accretion mechanisms via GECKO-AP, the work offers a timely and valuable addition to the literature on aerosol formation, especially in tropical and low- NOx environments. The manuscript is technically rigorous, and the authors demonstrate clear model measurement comparisons using data from SOAS and GOAMAZON. It is suitable for publication in ACP. However, I have several suggestions to improve the clarity, balance, and robustness of the conclusions.
Major Comments:
- Without directly flagging modeling assumptions the abstract and conclusions suggest that RO₂ accretion products make up 30–50% of PM₂.₅ in some regions. While the model results support this, the claim should be qualified with reference to underlying assumptions (e.g., product yield estimates, volatility assumptions, possible double counting). Use phrases like “may contribute” or “model results suggest up to...” to moderate certainty.
-While the text does mention uncertainties (e.g., calibration, partitioning), these could be more systematically discussed. I suggest including a short paragraph in the discussion or conclusion explicitly listing key uncertainties, such as lack of isomer-resolved detection and structural diversity limitations in GECKO-AP.
-There is some ambiguity about whether accretion product mass is being added to or replacing existing parameterized SOA mass in the model. Summarize the key point earlier: that empirically derived SOA yields may already include some fraction of accretion product mass. Provide a clearer summary of how this potential overlap was handled and consider including a schematic or table (perhaps in the SI) for clarity.
-GECKO-AP only considers peroxide formation and alkoxy decomposition channels. This is a major limitation that undermines structural diversity of products (e.g., imines, carbonates, or hydroperoxy derivatives). You should explicitly discuss what classes of real-world accretion products are likely being omitted. Quantify how sensitive your PM₂.₅ results might be to that structural simplification. Acknowledge this limitation and briefly discuss how it may impact modeled volatility and SOA mass.
-The manuscript lacks a sensitivity test where accretion products are assumed to have lower yields (i.e., uncertainty in GECKO-AP branching), evaporate faster (i.e., higher volatility), decompose photochemically. Include at least one sensitivity simulation testing either a lower dimer yield (e.g., 50% reduction), or increased loss rate (photolysis / fragmentation surrogate), and assess how much PM₂.₅ mass this removes globally. This will add robustness and credibility to the 30–50% claim.
-“Mean model/measurement ratio was 4.6...” This is substantial overprediction. The explanation (sensitivity-based calibration and fragmentation losses) is valid but not quantified. Provide a range of plausible “true” concentrations using a spectrum of calibration sensitivities (e.g., ± order of magnitude). Consider reporting normalized root mean square error (NRMSE) or similar metrics.
-The OA radiative effect changes are described, but without clear error bars or sensitivity runs to support confidence in the conclusion. Add uncertainty estimates (e.g., based on ±25% OA mass) to the TOA forcing calculations. Even just a bounding box would help.
- Recent literature has shown that peroxy radicals can react on aqueous or organic surfaces (e.g., aerosol interfaces or freshly nucleated particles). These reactions could either enhance or compete with gas-phase dimer formation. Please add a brief discussion addressing surface-phase RO₂ chemistry as a competing or complementary pathway. Additionally, could you comment on how including this mechanism might affect your global estimates?
Minor Comments
- The title could include “SOA” or “secondary organic aerosol” for better visibility.
- In the Abstract, consider briefly mentioning the distinction between peroxide and non-peroxide products.
- Clarify what is meant by “DILVOC” in the radiative effect section and its role in the simulations. Its role in radiative effect calculations is a bit unclear, reiterate its inclusion/exclusion in relevant figures/tables
- Some figures (e.g., model-measurement comparison plots) would benefit from more detailed legends or axis labels to improve standalone readability without flipping back to text.
-Consistently use “RO₂ accretion products” or “RO₂ dimers” throughout for clarity. Sometimes the manuscript says “accretion products,” sometimes “RO₂ dimers,” sometimes “non-peroxide dimers.” Clarify earlythat you're referring to peroxide, ester, and ether dimers as the dominant species, and consistently use a single term throughout (e.g., “RO₂ accretion products”).
- Must quantify or bound NO biases to ensure accurate RO₂ fate modeling.
- Need to address potential double-counting of OA when adding new chemistry to existing parameterizations.
- More clarification is needed on how RO₂ categories like “Small VOCs” and “Mixed VOCs” are chemically defined.
- The assumption that nearly 100% of OA is from accretion in some regions is likely an overestimate, needs better constraint or alternative explanations.
-You should acknowledge how autooxidation might shift results.