Articles | Volume 24, issue 16
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-24-9555-2024
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Impact of improved representation of volatile organic compound emissions and production of NOx reservoirs on modeled urban ozone production
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This study aims to address the underestimation of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) in emission inventories by adjusting scaling factors, optimizing photochemical reactions, and revising the schemes for generating additional polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons (PAHs). They utilized both ground-based and airborne observation data to evaluate the extent of the impact of improved VOCs emissions on the Seoul Metropolitan Area. This contributes to the enhancement of the model's ability to simulate urban air quality. This paper is exceptionally well-crafted, presenting intriguing findings. Consequently, I suggest it should be published following appropriate revisions.
1. To improve the alignment between observed VOC speciation and model predictions, the chemical mechanism has been revised and underestimated VOCs species has been increased. These revisions are designed to improve the understanding of VOC species in the atmosphere and to enhance the simulation capability of the model. I would like to know if these improvements are suitable for other regions than the SMA and the period other than May 1 to June 10, 2016.
2. Line 158, Are you referring to the process of individually adjusting the scaling factors for VOCs species and comparing them with observed values to determine the optimal scaling factors? And the determination of the best scaling factor typically involves assessing how well the adjusted model outputs align with actual measurements. What metrics were used in this study to quantify the differences between predicted and observed values?
3. Line 219, The observations clearly show a shift from increasing to decreasing POx with increasing NOx at approximately 6 ppb. However, the model did not capture this feature at all. What could be the reason for this? In addition, many discrepancies between simulations and observations in this study have been explained by insufficient model resolution. Could this be further addressed through the use of high-resolution models?
4. After scaling VOCs, the model simulations of NOx concentrations tend to be underestimated during the day and overestimated at night in Fig. 4b. Could you provide a more detailed explanation for this phenomenon?
5. The model does not fully capture the vertical profiles of PNs in the observation in Fig. 6. Is this due to an underestimation in the VOC emissions?
6. Line 370, Please verify the absence of Figure 2d in the article.
7. Line 230 The word "tha" appears to be a spelling error.
8. Figure 1 lacks a serial number indicating its order.