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https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-24-2583-2024
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Optical properties and simple forcing efficiency of the organic aerosols and black carbon emitted by residential wood burning in rural central Europe
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This publication highlights the effects of wood heating on air quality, which is important for our health and also for our climate. Experimental data were collected at a rural site where many wood-fired heating systems are in operation during the winter. Special attention will be given to particle properties that are relevant to the radiative forcing of these anthropogenic aerosols.
The work is important to the scientific community because it quantifies the existing particulate air pollution at this site and describes the properties of the particles that will allow understanding and improved modeling of their effects.
I recommend the paper for publication after the authors address the issues listed below.
One conceptual weakness in the interpreted data is the following:
An important metric used in the paper is PM1, which was calculated from the number-size distributions using density and shape assumptions. However, the size spectra were only recorded up to 600 nm (or 800 nm), and if one looks more closely at e.g. Figure 3f, one clearly has to assume that there is a substantial particle volume between 600 nm (800 nm) and 1000 nm. This does not seem to be taken into account and leads to a significant bias towards too low PM1 values. As a first step, the measured size distributions should be extrapolated into this gap by making appropriate assumptions (log-normal surface distribution or volume distribution?). A discussion and estimation of the resulting errors is mandatory.
Another important problem is that eq 14 is wrong (see below).
Specific comments (in order)
Line 21: "more common in rural areas". Is this true? In some cities, wood is also used for heating and dominates air quality in winter.
Lines 40-44: RWB is also important for the health of the local population. This could be mentioned in the abstract. Out of curiosity, has there been an epidemiological study of health effects at the site? Could be informative.
Line 95, end of intro: Suggestion to add a few lines pointing out technical solutions to make wood burning cleaner (better certified stoves, appropriate fuel, burning conditions, electrostatic precipitators).
Lines 113-114: The difference in m a.s.l. is 200 m and contradicts the information in Fig. 1.
Line 163: "Contribution from fibers": Please be more precise. On the one hand directly, but probably also by condensation of semi-volatile gases on the fibers.
Lines 164-169: This is a can of worms and very unsatisfactory. On the one hand, a site-dependent empirical correction for multiple scattering effects in the filter (C) is used, and on the other hand, the harmonization factor is used. Both factors are determined empirically and influence each other. This makes it difficult to compare different instruments on different types of aerosols. A more thorough discussion is needed to disentangle the two factors (C and H). In addition: I also assume that C and H are wavelength dependent - correct? Please clarify.
Line 180, Table 1: What is the weighing procedure for PM10? The table is not complete. I am missing information on offline TCA, ion chromatography, levoglucosan. Was an impactor used in the SMPS that allows the correct correction for multiple charging? This is essential for correct volume determination. Why does one SMPS measure only up to 600 nm and the other up to 800 nm? However, the aerodynamic diameter is given. How was this converted?
Line 182, eq 2: why does it say "fraction in PM"? this is misleading because a fraction is unitless - the rest of the equation is not unitless...
Line 188: Suggest writing PM0.8 or PM0.6 instead of PM1.
Line 210, Figure: I expect large systematic errors affecting the slope. Please discuss.
Line 214: Is OA_MPSS = PM1 ? please be consistent and use the same names.
Line 222: Is it justified to assume that transmission, albedo, backscatter fraction are constant, i.e. not wavelength dependent? For which part of the electromagnetic spectrum is this true?
Line 292: Is it EC or BC (EC is present with lower time resolution)?
Line 300, Fig 3: the color for "unstable" is hard to distinguish, perhaps better in green. Fig 3b: At what wavelength was BC measured? Fig 3f: here the spectra go up to 850 nm. an additional plot of the volume size distribution would be helpful.
Line 327, caption Fig. 4: the black points (outliers) are not visible.
Line 332, Fig. 5: ditto
Line 335 and elsewhere: given the relatively large uncertainties, it makes no sense to give the values so precisely. Here 1100 mM-1 would be appropriate.
Line 347, eq 12: This relationship is general and one could remove the BC here.
Line 351, eq 13: The exponent is an equation and therefore misleading. Just write -1 as the exponent.
Line 335, eq 14: I think this equation is clearly wrong. It should be: b_abs.BrC(l1)=b_abs(l1)-b_abs(950)*(l1/950)^-1.
Line 366, Fig. 6: Will this figure change if eq. 14 is changed? Depending on this, it will also lead to an adjustment of the discussion (e.g. lines 369-377).
Line 394: Will the "photochemical process" lead to an increase or decrease of AAE_BrC?
Lines 403-420: Again, the problem with PM1: How much does the missing volume affect the MAC values? I would like to see a presentation and discussion of the systematic errors.
Line 429: Regarding the measurement conditions: How were the particles sampled to the instruments (sampling conditions, at what temperatures and thus relative humidities were the particles measured)?
Line 450: The beta should be a_s.
Line 453: I have recalculated the RF values in Fig. 9 graphically and get about 20% lower values. Please check the integration. Note that in Fig. 9 the wavelengths are not equidistant as shown!
Line 460,461: two times: inverse square meter
Line 466: the lensing effect was not described before. Have you compared the MAC_BC with literature values? Should it be higher in this study?
Line 470, Table 3: The min and max values are not very meaningful because they depend on the choice of the averaging interval. Better would be e.g. quantiles
Line 489, 490: Consider (again) the number of significant digits. Put the units after the whole expression: e.g: 71 +- 56 ug/m3.