Articles | Volume 24, issue 20
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-24-12055-2024
© Author(s) 2024. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Atmospheric black carbon in the metropolitan area of La Paz and El Alto, Bolivia: concentration levels and emission sources
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-770', Anonymous Referee #1, 10 May 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-770', Anonymous Referee #2, 27 Jun 2024
- AC1: 'Reply on RC2', Valeria Mardoñez, 01 Aug 2024
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AR by Valeria Mardoñez on behalf of the Authors (02 Aug 2024)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (21 Aug 2024) by Yugo Kanaya
RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (22 Aug 2024)
ED: Publish as is (22 Aug 2024) by Yugo Kanaya
AR by Valeria Mardoñez on behalf of the Authors (03 Sep 2024)
Manuscript
Overall, this is a very well written and structured manuscript that brings new insights on the sources and variability of BC and its' properties in central South-America. The manuscript fits in the scope of the journal and is recommend for publication subject to technical corrections.
General comments:
Specific comments:
Please, check the correct spelling of all the co-authors.
L103: “it is also intended” seems like repetition, consider re-phrasing.
L119: What is meant here with temperature amplitude? Max-min?
L150: Was the “basic meteorological station” then solely an anemometer? Please clarify.
L152: Which “other meteorological variables” were included? These could be listed.
L167: replace m2->m3
L.265: “the assumption that the properties of the urban aerosol do not change drastically on their transport to CHC-GAW” Which properties of the urban aerosol this refers to? Based on table S2, even during daytime BC aerosol optical properties (MAC) were very different at the sites. How much could this add uncertainty on the defined Cf? Do you have an idea of the SSA at these sites?
L.279-280: “The babs estimated using the Cf factors selected for each model of AE31 decrease the instrumental difference to roughly 27%.” Please, clarify. What are different models of AE31 and what are the instruments for which the difference is 27%?
L336. replace WB->BB
L341-343: “The pair of wavelengths chosen to apply in this method to apportion the contribution of local vehicular emissions (also known as liquid fuel) from the regional agricultural biomass burning emissions (also known as solid fuel) were 470 and 950 nm.” Was there any particular reason for this choice?
L.417 “appear relatively elevated” : compared to what? In previous paragraph the authors write "do not stand out as alarming" which could be interpreted partly contradictory.
Table 2: Add information on the inlet cut-size (PM10?) after eBC, similar to what is given for EC. Were the 24h-samples of EC for CHC-GAW completely omitted from the analysis? They appear in the methods so please clarify.
L457. replace: suset->sunset
L520. “This change in the AAE during this period of the day takes place when eBC mass concentrations reach their minimum, thus, no significant impact in absorption was observed at 880 nm.” Message from this sentence is not clear. It raises a question if we are expecting dust to be visible at 880nm?
L541. “it overestimated the mixing state of the urban aerosol” here one must remember also the uncertainties in Cf.
L567. “Nevertheless, the spectral dependence of MACEC and MACrBC values is different.” Could this be clarified and opened a bit more?
L591. Fig S6 is missing.
L618 Fig S7 is missing.
L662-663: Fig S8 and Table S3 are missing
L672 S9 missing.
L701 Table S4 missing.
Supplement Table S2: replace ii->i