Articles | Volume 23, issue 22
https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-23-14271-2023
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Measurement report: Dust and anthropogenic aerosols' vertical distributions over northern China dense aerosols gathered at the top of the mixing layer
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ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (29 Sep 2023) by Matthias Tesche
AR by Zhuang Wang on behalf of the Authors (02 Oct 2023)
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The manuscript, entitled with "Dust and anthropogenic aerosols vertical distributions over Beijing―dense aerosols gathered at the top of the mixing layer", described the analysis of vertical distributions of anthropogenic, dust and polluted dust at Beijing (capital of China), based on 3 years polarization Raman lidar measurements. The authors presented the annual and seasonal cycle of total AOD and AOD within mixing boundary layer (MBL) and free troposphere (FT), mass concentration of different aerosol types and discussed the possible mechanisms behind. The manuscript is generally well-written and the database of aerosol optical properties at 355 nm are rather valuable for future satellite mission. However, there are issues that need to be fixed or clarified before the consideration of publication.
Major issue
1. The authors speculate too much in the data analysis. For example, in page 18, line 10-12, "The high anthropogenic aerosols mass concentration in the upper air (0.4.0.9 km) over Beijing in summer is mainly caused by the growth of particle hygroscopicity under the influence of southern transport.", this statement cannot be supported by the results presented in the manuscript. As the authors described, all profiles with high relative humidity (> 85%) have been ruled out from the data analysis (see page 6, line 20-21). Then, hygroscopic growth should not be significant. And more importantly, no results of hygroscopic growth factors were shown, how this conclusion can be made? Similar issue is also laid in the analysis of MBL height and aerosol mass concentration (There is a minor issue associated with this). I hope the authors can focus on their own results and start from these results to re-think what they can conclude.
Minor issues
1. Page 5, line 8, the authors should be specific that the gradient of which quantity they used in the MBL height determination. And how do they treat the very shallow nonctual boundary layer height within the incomplete overlap region?
2. Page 6, line 21-22, the authors need to explain why they intended to use lidar-derived MBL height in MBL AOD calculation instead of using ERA-5 MBL height, although they think ERA-5 height is reliable and can be used to evaluate the lidar-derived MBL height.
3. Page 7, line 24, "Bac" -> "BAC"
4. Page 9, line 17, why do the authors think "it suggests a strong sytematic coupliing between ML and FT, ...", instead of they are both modulated by the same mechanism, like regional transport of aerosols.
5. Page 10, line 25, PDR at 532 should be at percentage, namely, 0.082, or adding a percent sign (%) instead. And the authors need to check the manuscript thoroughly, because there are many places with this error.
6. Page 11, line 33, "building warming" -> "building heating".
6. Page 11, line 33, "MEGGA" -> "MERRA". (also in caption of fig. 8)
8. Page 13, line 17, "upper air pollution transport" is more appropriate.
9. Page 15, line 22, "bottom" should be removed.
10. Page 15, line 29-32, correlation of coefficient cannot be used to determine the goodness of fit for non-linear models. Therefore, it cannot be compared between linear fitting and non-linear fitting, just by looking at correlation of coefficient. The author should either use a different metric to do the comparison or remove such statement.
11. Page 17, line 14-15, the authors should be specific when mentioning "near the ML" or "around ML" (the same page, line 18).
12. Page 18, line 20-21, the authors should clarify why "the bottom dust mass concentration is mainly influenced by transport" instead of by local sources.
13. In caption of fig 2, Check about the conversion factors of dust and anthropogenic aerosols. It's too low for dust and a little high for anthropogenic aerosols (see ref.[1-2]).
References:
1. Mamouri R, Ansmann A. Fine and coarse dust separation with polarization lidar. Atmospheric Measurement Techniques. 2014;7(11):3717-35.
2. Ansmann A, Mamouri R-E, Hofer J, Baars H, Althausen D, Abdullaev SF. Dust mass, cloud condensation nuclei, and ice-nucleating particle profiling with polarization lidar: updated POLIPHON conversion factors from global AERONET analysis. Atmospheric Measurement Techniques. 2019;12(9):4849-65.