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Measurements of ice crystal fluxes from the surface at a mountain top site
Abstract. New observations of anomalously high cloud ice crystal concentrations at the Jungfraujoch research station (Switzerland, 3.5 km a.s.l.) are presented. High-resolution measurements of these ice crystals using a high-speed 2D imaging cloud particle spectrometer confirm that the concentrations far exceed those expected from any known primary ice production mechanisms and are at temperatures well below those for known secondary ice production processes to contribute. A detailed analysis of the cloud ice crystal sizes and habits with respect to wind speed and growth regimes confirms, as hypothesised in previous studies, that their origin is not due to blowing snow or related wind speed influences. As first hypothesised by Vali et al. (Vali et al., 2012) using remote sensing and by Lloyd et al., (2015) with in situ measurements, the most likely explanation is due to a strong surface source generated by the interaction of turbulent deposition of supercooled droplets to fragile ice-covered snow surfaces. This process enhances the detachment of crystal fragments wherein the smaller size mode is turbulently re-suspended even at low wind speeds below expected blowing snow thresholds. These then continue to grow, adding significantly to the ice crystal number concentrations whose size and habit is determined by the transport time between the ice crystal source and measurement location and liquid water profile within the cloud. We confirm, using eddy covariance measurements of ice particle number fluxes, that the likely source is significantly far upwind to preclude flow distortion effects such that the source plume has homogenised by the time they are measured at the mountain top summit.
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RC1: 'Comment on acp-2022-69', Anonymous Referee #1, 15 Feb 2022
This paper describes in situ observations of anomalously high cloud ice crystal concentrations at a sharp mountain peak in the Alps, the Jungfraujoch research station. The idea of surface-induced ice initiation is an important one, currently not captured in any model cloud microphysics scheme. The paper has many missing elements, several conclusions are not supported by the data, and the writing can be improved. (There are many incomplete or grammatically erroneous sentences).
The first conclusion is not demonstrated with the available data. Blowing snow particles cannot be ruled out, because no threshold wind speed is imposed. Also, distant sources are possible, e.g. rimed trees at lower elevation. The 3rd conclusion seems to state this (?). The 4th bullet in the conclusions cannot be demonstrated either, because particle fallspeed is not measured, only air vertical velocity.
One or more photos of the instruments and the rotating wing would really help. What are the axes of rotation for the rotating wing? Vertical and horizontal as suggested in Fig. 1? How was the wing rotation performed? Apparently not with a large trailing cross-vane, but mechanical / computer-controlled? Based on average 3D (or 2D?) wind over the past minute. Is the vertical wind component steady enough for this purpose?
I find it hard to comprehend the strong median vertical velocities (Table 2) measured on a flat surface (a terrace). The aero-wing could be located over the railing facing the south side or the north side of the terrace, but not both. How large is the terrace, how tall is the tower assembly shown in Fig. 1.
Fig. 4. Is the sample representative? Is there a good meteorological reason that northerly wind cases are relatively calm compared to many southerly cases?
Please share a time series of vertical velocities (w), as well as large (>50 micron) particle concentrations, LWC, and v (meridional wind), delineating the 8 min periods used here. The separation between positive and negative fluxes seems rather arbitrary. Such time series may provide evidence for the 2nd conclusion (currently missing).
Was the 3V-CPI aspirated to ensure a steady flow? How was the flow rate through the cannister measured?
Why was the PVM not on the rotating wing? The PVM is designed for airborne use, with through-flow in one specific direction. How does the PVM LWC compare to the CDP LWC (integrating over all particle sizes between 2 and 50 micron)? Is there a PVM LWC underestimation under stronger w?
In the Abstract and in the Conclusions, it is mentioned that Vali et al. (2012) was the first to hypothesize the surface source of ice crystals, through collision of of supercooled droplets with ice covered snow surfaces. It appears that this was first hypothesized by Geerts et al. (2011) (https://doi.org/10.1175/JAS-D-10-05009.1): There second conclusion is copied here: “Sometimes ice crystals appear to initiate within the BL. Possible mechanisms include blowing snow and ice multiplication (splintering) near the ground. The latter involves supercooled droplets colliding with rimed vegetation. These surface-based ice initiation mechanisms remain unproven.”
Fig. 4 and Table 3 and 4 mention large and small particle fluxes. Earlier, particle concentration fluxes were considered only for large particles (>50 micron), based on the assumption that smaller particles are mostly liquid. If that is true, one should examine the flux of LWC, not the flux of N_liquid. Later in the text, there is mention of small ice particles.
Please discuss the meaning of upward vs downward fluxes in terms of surface sources vs snowfall. Is the assumption that upward fluxes are from ground sources, and downward fluxes from the atmosphere? I would disagree with that. To begin, I would eliminate all cases with falling snow (non-precipitating cloud only, according to nearby radar profiles, if available). The 5th conclusion is not a conclusion at all, just a discussion item, about understanding vertical motion around this peak. To make progress there, it should be mentioned that LES or other extreme-resolution modelling may be needed, driven by proximity sounding data.
Minor comments:
I imagine the Metek sonic anemometer (and maybe other probes and the rotating mechanism) frequently succumbed to icing? Were these components heated?
The abstract says “… or related wind speed influences”. The proposed mechanism is wind speed dependent as well, both for splintering on an icy obstacle and for effective dispersion in the BL
Is the wind speed in Fig. 4 the 3D or 2D (horizontal) wind speed?
Fig. 4 can be clarified with some text in the Fig or in the Fig caption. Panels CD are upward fluxes only, EF downward fluxes. Also, the title should be on top, and the units below. Deviations from this make the multi-panel display hard to decipher.
Table 2: the column “fluxes” presumably indicates the range fluxes from the smallest (neg) to the largest (pos). How come only 1 number is given for 8 Feb? The wind direction (N/S) is the prevailing direction? It would be useful to add the mean meridional wind speed v, and also the cloud base, from an upstream sounding or ceilometer, if available.
Table 3: define large and small fluxes. Earlier, particle concentration fluxes were considered only for large particles (>50 micron), based on the assumption that smaller particles are mostly liquid. Later in the text, there is mention of small ice particles.
L32: add comma: … developed, technical
L64: “PVM and similar cloud spectrometers …” the PVM is not a spectrometer
L66: please clarify the following sentence: “Both the CDP and PVM sensors are
also known to be sensitive to ice particles, Gerber & Demott (2014), and as such fluxes from these were not considered here due to uncertainties associated with their lack of ice-liquid discrimination, but rather to quality control total particle number and volume concentrations from the other spectrometers.”
L138: each periods ï all periods
L152: … as discussed by Connolly et al. (Connolly et al., 2007) ï as discussed by Connolly et al. (2007)
L208, L268, others. Not a proper sentence.
L217. How do you know that there were liquid water droplets exceeded the 50 micron size threshold on 9 Feb? Fig. 8 does not show that
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2022-69-RC1 -
RC2: 'Comment on acp-2022-69', Anonymous Referee #2, 11 Mar 2022
The manuscript presents ground-based in-situ measurements taken at the Jungfraujoch research station, Switzerland. Anomalously high ice crystal concentrations were observed. The ice crystal fluxes are calculated using the data from sonic anemometers and cloud particle probes mounted on a tower on a terrace. Particles with optical sizes larger than 50 um are considered ice crystals. It is argued that the source of the high ice crystal concentrations is not blowing snow, but that the ice crystals grew on the snow surface.
The work as such is sound. However, I have some issues with the foundation of the method, the presentation of the findings, and the claims drawn from them.
To my knowledge, it is the first time that the EC method is used for ice number fluxes. If it was used it is not a well-established method, in particular at the challenging topography on Jungfraujoch. I am concerned that the location on the terrace has a strong influence on the measurement. A thorough validation of the not well-established method in a challenging topography is needed to lay the foundation of the claims drawn from them.
Although it is fine if not all claims are supported by the presented figures, it occurs too often in this manuscript (e.g. It is not shown that ice number concentrations with negative fluxes occur more often during northerly winds).
Some claims in the summary were not thoroughly discussed before and alternative explanations were not considered.
Overall, this is an interesting study that will add to the understanding of the sources of ice crystals at snow-covered surfaces near the ground. It certainly can be revised such that it will merit publication, but major revisions are needed.
Major issues:
- The fluxes were locally measured, and I am concerned that the local surrounding strongly influences the measurements. The following questions should be addressed to ensure that the measured fluxes are representative of the surrounding.
Has the EC method been used for ice number fluxes before? If yes, what are typical values for less complex terrain? Are the measured ice number fluxes at Jungfraujoch realistic values?
Do the terrace and the building influence the wind properties measured at the tower? Does the influence on the wind properties depend on the wind direction/wind speed? What is the influence on the ice crystal flux measurement? Can you rule out that the fluxes are generated by the influence of the local surrounding?
Discussing a time series of fluxes for a cloud event and a histogram of the flux values could be helpful for validating the EC method for ice number fluxes at Jungfraujoch.
- Here are my specific questions to the claims in the summary, which should be better supported by the presented figure and discussion before:
Line 254 – 255: What is the wind speed threshold for blowing snow? Is the wind speed measured at the platform representative of the wind speed at the region where the ice crystals are lifted from the ground? Could other surface or near-surface processes like described in (Beck et al., 2018, https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-18-8909-2018) be responsible for the high ice crystal concentrations? Which of the presented cases were cloud-free cases and which are not?
Line 261-262: The claim that “it takes time for the surface source to form” is not supported by the presented data. A discussion of a time series of fluxes could be beneficial.
Line 264-265: Why are the observed fluxes not consistent with blowing snow? What fluxes are consistent with blowing snow?
Specific comments:
Line 29-30: What is the reference of the “other cases”.
Line 29: Change “chapter” to “manuscript”.
Line 117: Why does the aspect ratio differ depending on wind direction?
Line 118: Have you tested “if the corrections made are valid or not” and can you show the analysis of it?
Line 131: What are the consequences of not using the planar fit coordinate system?
Line 138: What is “a third rotation”?
Table 2: Why does the cloud case on 08.02.2017 does not have a range of fluxes? To make the table better readable I suggest rounding the fluxes to two significant digits and improving the line breaks of the table.
Line 146: Would be beneficial to present the result of the ogive test to show that 8 minutes is a suitable average period for the flux calculation.
Line 147: Why is the wind direction corrected for two minutes only, although the wing rotates into the mean wind field every minute?
Figure 3: The “1e4” should be bigger on the third flux panel.
Line 166-167: Where is it shown that ice number concentrations with negative fluxes occur more often during northerly winds?
Line 162-163 and 168-169: For these claims, it would be beneficial to show a histogram of the measured flux values.
Line 173: Do what does “this” refer to?
Table 3/Table 4: It would be helpful to indicate to which panel each line corresponds.
Line 203-204: Which peak is meant? I see a peak for all three cases in the CDP measurements.
Line 204-205: Unclear what is meant with “no cut off for larger particles after this maximum”.
Line 208-215: This sentence should be moved to chapter 2.
Line 221-222: Unclear what is meant with “the second peak of larger particles”.
Figure 5: Instead of the colour bar, I suggest giving the temperature of the three cases directly.
Line 274-275 From Table 3 all but one cloud event have positive and negative fluxes.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2022-69-RC2 - The fluxes were locally measured, and I am concerned that the local surrounding strongly influences the measurements. The following questions should be addressed to ensure that the measured fluxes are representative of the surrounding.
Interactive discussion
Status: closed
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RC1: 'Comment on acp-2022-69', Anonymous Referee #1, 15 Feb 2022
This paper describes in situ observations of anomalously high cloud ice crystal concentrations at a sharp mountain peak in the Alps, the Jungfraujoch research station. The idea of surface-induced ice initiation is an important one, currently not captured in any model cloud microphysics scheme. The paper has many missing elements, several conclusions are not supported by the data, and the writing can be improved. (There are many incomplete or grammatically erroneous sentences).
The first conclusion is not demonstrated with the available data. Blowing snow particles cannot be ruled out, because no threshold wind speed is imposed. Also, distant sources are possible, e.g. rimed trees at lower elevation. The 3rd conclusion seems to state this (?). The 4th bullet in the conclusions cannot be demonstrated either, because particle fallspeed is not measured, only air vertical velocity.
One or more photos of the instruments and the rotating wing would really help. What are the axes of rotation for the rotating wing? Vertical and horizontal as suggested in Fig. 1? How was the wing rotation performed? Apparently not with a large trailing cross-vane, but mechanical / computer-controlled? Based on average 3D (or 2D?) wind over the past minute. Is the vertical wind component steady enough for this purpose?
I find it hard to comprehend the strong median vertical velocities (Table 2) measured on a flat surface (a terrace). The aero-wing could be located over the railing facing the south side or the north side of the terrace, but not both. How large is the terrace, how tall is the tower assembly shown in Fig. 1.
Fig. 4. Is the sample representative? Is there a good meteorological reason that northerly wind cases are relatively calm compared to many southerly cases?
Please share a time series of vertical velocities (w), as well as large (>50 micron) particle concentrations, LWC, and v (meridional wind), delineating the 8 min periods used here. The separation between positive and negative fluxes seems rather arbitrary. Such time series may provide evidence for the 2nd conclusion (currently missing).
Was the 3V-CPI aspirated to ensure a steady flow? How was the flow rate through the cannister measured?
Why was the PVM not on the rotating wing? The PVM is designed for airborne use, with through-flow in one specific direction. How does the PVM LWC compare to the CDP LWC (integrating over all particle sizes between 2 and 50 micron)? Is there a PVM LWC underestimation under stronger w?
In the Abstract and in the Conclusions, it is mentioned that Vali et al. (2012) was the first to hypothesize the surface source of ice crystals, through collision of of supercooled droplets with ice covered snow surfaces. It appears that this was first hypothesized by Geerts et al. (2011) (https://doi.org/10.1175/JAS-D-10-05009.1): There second conclusion is copied here: “Sometimes ice crystals appear to initiate within the BL. Possible mechanisms include blowing snow and ice multiplication (splintering) near the ground. The latter involves supercooled droplets colliding with rimed vegetation. These surface-based ice initiation mechanisms remain unproven.”
Fig. 4 and Table 3 and 4 mention large and small particle fluxes. Earlier, particle concentration fluxes were considered only for large particles (>50 micron), based on the assumption that smaller particles are mostly liquid. If that is true, one should examine the flux of LWC, not the flux of N_liquid. Later in the text, there is mention of small ice particles.
Please discuss the meaning of upward vs downward fluxes in terms of surface sources vs snowfall. Is the assumption that upward fluxes are from ground sources, and downward fluxes from the atmosphere? I would disagree with that. To begin, I would eliminate all cases with falling snow (non-precipitating cloud only, according to nearby radar profiles, if available). The 5th conclusion is not a conclusion at all, just a discussion item, about understanding vertical motion around this peak. To make progress there, it should be mentioned that LES or other extreme-resolution modelling may be needed, driven by proximity sounding data.
Minor comments:
I imagine the Metek sonic anemometer (and maybe other probes and the rotating mechanism) frequently succumbed to icing? Were these components heated?
The abstract says “… or related wind speed influences”. The proposed mechanism is wind speed dependent as well, both for splintering on an icy obstacle and for effective dispersion in the BL
Is the wind speed in Fig. 4 the 3D or 2D (horizontal) wind speed?
Fig. 4 can be clarified with some text in the Fig or in the Fig caption. Panels CD are upward fluxes only, EF downward fluxes. Also, the title should be on top, and the units below. Deviations from this make the multi-panel display hard to decipher.
Table 2: the column “fluxes” presumably indicates the range fluxes from the smallest (neg) to the largest (pos). How come only 1 number is given for 8 Feb? The wind direction (N/S) is the prevailing direction? It would be useful to add the mean meridional wind speed v, and also the cloud base, from an upstream sounding or ceilometer, if available.
Table 3: define large and small fluxes. Earlier, particle concentration fluxes were considered only for large particles (>50 micron), based on the assumption that smaller particles are mostly liquid. Later in the text, there is mention of small ice particles.
L32: add comma: … developed, technical
L64: “PVM and similar cloud spectrometers …” the PVM is not a spectrometer
L66: please clarify the following sentence: “Both the CDP and PVM sensors are
also known to be sensitive to ice particles, Gerber & Demott (2014), and as such fluxes from these were not considered here due to uncertainties associated with their lack of ice-liquid discrimination, but rather to quality control total particle number and volume concentrations from the other spectrometers.”
L138: each periods ï all periods
L152: … as discussed by Connolly et al. (Connolly et al., 2007) ï as discussed by Connolly et al. (2007)
L208, L268, others. Not a proper sentence.
L217. How do you know that there were liquid water droplets exceeded the 50 micron size threshold on 9 Feb? Fig. 8 does not show that
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2022-69-RC1 -
RC2: 'Comment on acp-2022-69', Anonymous Referee #2, 11 Mar 2022
The manuscript presents ground-based in-situ measurements taken at the Jungfraujoch research station, Switzerland. Anomalously high ice crystal concentrations were observed. The ice crystal fluxes are calculated using the data from sonic anemometers and cloud particle probes mounted on a tower on a terrace. Particles with optical sizes larger than 50 um are considered ice crystals. It is argued that the source of the high ice crystal concentrations is not blowing snow, but that the ice crystals grew on the snow surface.
The work as such is sound. However, I have some issues with the foundation of the method, the presentation of the findings, and the claims drawn from them.
To my knowledge, it is the first time that the EC method is used for ice number fluxes. If it was used it is not a well-established method, in particular at the challenging topography on Jungfraujoch. I am concerned that the location on the terrace has a strong influence on the measurement. A thorough validation of the not well-established method in a challenging topography is needed to lay the foundation of the claims drawn from them.
Although it is fine if not all claims are supported by the presented figures, it occurs too often in this manuscript (e.g. It is not shown that ice number concentrations with negative fluxes occur more often during northerly winds).
Some claims in the summary were not thoroughly discussed before and alternative explanations were not considered.
Overall, this is an interesting study that will add to the understanding of the sources of ice crystals at snow-covered surfaces near the ground. It certainly can be revised such that it will merit publication, but major revisions are needed.
Major issues:
- The fluxes were locally measured, and I am concerned that the local surrounding strongly influences the measurements. The following questions should be addressed to ensure that the measured fluxes are representative of the surrounding.
Has the EC method been used for ice number fluxes before? If yes, what are typical values for less complex terrain? Are the measured ice number fluxes at Jungfraujoch realistic values?
Do the terrace and the building influence the wind properties measured at the tower? Does the influence on the wind properties depend on the wind direction/wind speed? What is the influence on the ice crystal flux measurement? Can you rule out that the fluxes are generated by the influence of the local surrounding?
Discussing a time series of fluxes for a cloud event and a histogram of the flux values could be helpful for validating the EC method for ice number fluxes at Jungfraujoch.
- Here are my specific questions to the claims in the summary, which should be better supported by the presented figure and discussion before:
Line 254 – 255: What is the wind speed threshold for blowing snow? Is the wind speed measured at the platform representative of the wind speed at the region where the ice crystals are lifted from the ground? Could other surface or near-surface processes like described in (Beck et al., 2018, https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-18-8909-2018) be responsible for the high ice crystal concentrations? Which of the presented cases were cloud-free cases and which are not?
Line 261-262: The claim that “it takes time for the surface source to form” is not supported by the presented data. A discussion of a time series of fluxes could be beneficial.
Line 264-265: Why are the observed fluxes not consistent with blowing snow? What fluxes are consistent with blowing snow?
Specific comments:
Line 29-30: What is the reference of the “other cases”.
Line 29: Change “chapter” to “manuscript”.
Line 117: Why does the aspect ratio differ depending on wind direction?
Line 118: Have you tested “if the corrections made are valid or not” and can you show the analysis of it?
Line 131: What are the consequences of not using the planar fit coordinate system?
Line 138: What is “a third rotation”?
Table 2: Why does the cloud case on 08.02.2017 does not have a range of fluxes? To make the table better readable I suggest rounding the fluxes to two significant digits and improving the line breaks of the table.
Line 146: Would be beneficial to present the result of the ogive test to show that 8 minutes is a suitable average period for the flux calculation.
Line 147: Why is the wind direction corrected for two minutes only, although the wing rotates into the mean wind field every minute?
Figure 3: The “1e4” should be bigger on the third flux panel.
Line 166-167: Where is it shown that ice number concentrations with negative fluxes occur more often during northerly winds?
Line 162-163 and 168-169: For these claims, it would be beneficial to show a histogram of the measured flux values.
Line 173: Do what does “this” refer to?
Table 3/Table 4: It would be helpful to indicate to which panel each line corresponds.
Line 203-204: Which peak is meant? I see a peak for all three cases in the CDP measurements.
Line 204-205: Unclear what is meant with “no cut off for larger particles after this maximum”.
Line 208-215: This sentence should be moved to chapter 2.
Line 221-222: Unclear what is meant with “the second peak of larger particles”.
Figure 5: Instead of the colour bar, I suggest giving the temperature of the three cases directly.
Line 274-275 From Table 3 all but one cloud event have positive and negative fluxes.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2022-69-RC2 - The fluxes were locally measured, and I am concerned that the local surrounding strongly influences the measurements. The following questions should be addressed to ensure that the measured fluxes are representative of the surrounding.
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