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The influence of weather-driven processes on tropospheric ozone
Abstract. Near-surface ozone is an harmful air pollutant, which is determined to a considerable extent by weather-controlled processes, and may be significantly impacted by water vapour forming complexes with peroxy radicals. The role of water in the reaction of HO2 radical with nitrogen oxides is known from the literature, and in current models the water complex is considered by assuming a linear dependence on water concentrations. In fact, recent experimental evidence has been published, showing the significant role of water on the kinetics of one of the most important reaction for ozone chemistry, namely NO2 + OH. Here, the available kinetic data for the HOx + NOx reactions have been included in the atmospheric chemistry model ECHAM5/MESSy (EMAC) to test its global significance. Among the modified kinetics, the newly added HNO3 channel from HO2 + NO, dominates, significantly reducing NO2. A major removal process of near-surface ozone is dry deposition accounting for 20 % of the total tropospheric ozone loss mostly occurring over vegetation. However, parameterizations for modelling dry deposition represent a major source of uncertainty for tropospheric ozone simulations. This potentially belongs to the reasons why global models, such as EMAC used here, overestimate ozone with respect to observations. In fact, the employed parameterization is hardly sensitive to local meteorological conditions (e.g., humidity) and lacks non-stomatal deposition. In this study, a dry deposition scheme including these features have been used in EMAC, affecting not only the deposition of ozone but of its precursors, resulting in lower chemical production of ozone. Additionally, we improved the emissions of isoprene and nitrous acid (HONO). Namely, for isoprene emissions we have accounted for the impact of drought stress which confers a higher model sensitivity to meteorology leading to reduced annual emissions down to 32 %. For HONO, we have implemented soil emissions, which depend on soil moisture and thus on precipitation. We estimate for the first time a global source strength of 7 Tg(N) a−1. Furthermore, the usage of a parameterization for the production of lightning NOx that depends on cloud top height contributes to a more realistic representation of NO2 columns over remote oceans with respect to the satellite measurements of the Ozone Monitoring Instrument (OMI). The combination of all the model modifications reduces the simulated global ozone burden by ≈ 20 % to 337 Tg, which is in better agreement with recent estimates. By comparing simulation results with measurements from the Infrared Atmospheric Sounding Interferometer (IASI) and the Tropospheric Ozone Assessment Report (TOAR) databases (of 2009) we demonstrate an overall reduction of the ozone bias by a factor of 2.
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RC1: 'Comment on acp-2021-584', Anonymous Referee #1, 22 Jul 2021
This paper explores the impact of several changes to a global chemical transport model on tropospheric ozone, in particular the role of water vapor in chemical kinetics, dry deposition, and natural NOx, isoprene and HONO emissions. The authors have attempted to harmonize their study under the theme of ‘weather-driven processes on tropospheric ozone’, but their attempt fails. Not only are processes tied to meteorology in rather crude ways (which my main complaint is that the paper does not acknowledge), but the focus on annual and summer average global distributions is inconsistent with the theme of furthering understanding of the impact of weather-driven processes on ozone. The paper, including the background and motivation, lacks focus and direction, and often does not reflect current knowledge (including current understanding of processes examined). In particular, the papers referenced are often inappropriate, and the knowledge base cited is incomplete. In theory, this paper is much more suitable for Geoscientific Model Development, but needs substantial improvement, new analysis, and reframing, including clear articulation of what we are learning, before publication anywhere.
First, the authors alter the reaction kinetics related to HO2+NO and RO2+NO with respect to water vapor. Most of the impact is from HO2+NO. They discuss how this changes chemical production and loss of Ox as compared to other models. Then the authors discuss how this impacts tropospheric composition and dry deposition, but it is unclear what they find in their study that complements other work vs. what others find (that the authors are inferring happens in the model too). It seems like their findings are substantial in terms of tropospheric and surface ozone but honestly I have trouble following what they are doing and putting their findings in the context of uncertainty related to these changes to the reaction kinetics. The authors need to better describe motivate what they had before and why they made the change, and the associated uncertainty. The current motivation makes it seem like these changes are obvious/critical/completely certain, but then why has no one else made them?
Second, the authors describe the impacts of a new dry deposition scheme (previously described by a paper this year in GMD with the same first author). The analysis on dry deposition focuses on surface ozone changes during morning vs. night and simply compares the total loss to dry dep to other models. My first complain is -- what are we learning from this analysis? As is, this analysis does not merit publication. The difference changes to surface ozone during morning vs. night with dry deposition are intriguing, but the authors barely touch on it. My second complaint is that the authors pitch their representation of dry deposition as state of the science when it is not. From what I can tell, the authors’ initial dry deposition scheme was not good, and there are only rather basic improvements to the new one.
Third, the authors describe a new drought dependence of isoprene emissions. The authors only really discuss how this changes annual total isoprene emission totals as compared to previous estimates. The authors barely discuss how this changes summer ozone, although there seem to be interesting changes in Fig. 6. As is, this analysis does not merit a publication.
Fourth, the authors put a simple HONO soil emission parameterization into their model by scaling soil NO emissions by HONO/NO ratios from boreal field samples. As the authors note not many global models have soil HONO emission sources, so theoretically this is new. (The authors need to clarify if this is the first HONO soil emission parameterization in a global model, or one of the first; if the latter, please cite other work). However, I think the authors need to discuss their approach and the related uncertainties more. Just saying soil HONO and NO emissions are ‘mechanistically similar’ and applying boreal field sample values globally is not sufficient. (By ‘boreal’ – the authors mean northern mid latitude regions, right? Or do they mean northern hemisphere?). There also needs to be more substantive analysis of the impact of HONO. The authors discuss how HONO emissions impact the HONO/NOx ratio but do not describe what this ratio means, or why it should be one value over the other. (The reader is also completely relying on the author to summarize the model-observations comparison for HONO/NOx accurately – it is likely worth adding a figure comparing model vs. observed values.) The authors then discuss the impact on OH, NO2 and O3 extremely briefly, and with a lot of speculation. I would ask the authors to focus on what their plots are showing and what we are learning from their analysis, with a particular focus on addressing the goal of the paper (which currently seems to be to address the impact of weather driven processes on ozone, but in my view needs to change).
Fifth, the authors put the Price and Rind lightning NOx scheme into their model and show how it changes NO2 (Figure 16c looks the same to me as Figure 16a though…so I’m not sure I see the improvement). They say it improves the model bias over tropical oceans and N Africa and the central US, but again I do not see this with their figures… They also show how it changes the tropospheric ozone bias compared to IASI (again, hard to see the improvement on Fig 12… I can see that there is a decrease in SOME parts of the tropical Pacific, but a worsening over others in 13c). Nonetheless, the authors’ claim that “the usage of the commonly applied P+R scheme improves significantly the NO2 bias between EMAC and OMI as well as the trop O3 discrepancy to ISAI over the tropical Pacific Ocean” seems like an overstatement, and I’m not sure their current analysis on lightning NOx merits publication.
Overall, while the updates to the model do not always seem to be state of the science, I understand that this is a global model with limited represented of processes like convective updrafts and land surface functioning and soil microbes, & thus parameterizations need to be simple. I want to be clear that I’m not asking the authors to represent everything in a state of the science way, rather better articulate what the state of the science is, and justify their decisions in going the simple route. And of course the authors also need to convey what we are learning from their changes… not just document them.
I also understand that the authors are limited because the surface ozone data for which they use to evaluate their model is mostly for northern mid-latitudes, but many of the changes in ozone occur in the southern hemisphere and tropics, or high northern latitudes. This is an issue for all global modelers, and the authors need to find a better way of addressing this issue. For example, what are we learning from places where we do have observations that can lend confidence to elsewhere? What are other observational constraints that can be used to evaluate poorly sampled areas? There must be something better than one global map of the IASI tropospheric ozone columns and one global map of the OMI tropospheric NO2 columns.
Minor comments (I have many minor comments, only some of which I have taken the time to record here).
Line 3 – I don’t know what ‘the water complex’ refers to
Line 5 – one of the most important reactions
Line 9 – I don’t think it’s true that most trop ozone loss to dry deposition occurs to vegetation, a lot of loss happens to snow and ice and water as recent papers such as Hardacre et al. 2015, Pound et al., 2020 (https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-20-4227-2020), Clifton et al., 2020 (https://doi.org/ 10.1029/2020JD032398) have suggested, despite relatively small deposition velocities over these surfaces
Line 27 – radiative forcing should only be discussed when referring to a change time period
Line 220-230 – will the authors illustrate the changes they are making as described here with equations? I find it very hard to figure out what they are doing vs. just discussing
Line 295-7 – are the authors suggesting here that O3 loss through reaction between O3+NO is underestimated here, and may cause the remainder of the high bias in O3?
Line 389 – can the authors give the uncertainty in a relative sense?
Line 390 – what is the IC/CG ratio?
Line 399 – who describes the Price and Rind scheme as robust?
Line 399 – it’s not just a question of flash frequencies … but also the amount of NOx per flash and how to distribute the NOx vertically
Another minor issue is in their methods the authors often do not give the reader sufficient information. For example, can the authors elaborate on what ‘weakly nudged’ means? Also, discussing the model routines by their names in the model is not very helpful for the reader. Another example is how am I supposed to interpret Table A1 (what does number refer to, what is IGBP category and how is it used, what are the soil samples from? The title is unhelpful).
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2021-584-RC1 -
AC1: 'Author comment on RC1', Tamara Emmerichs, 04 Aug 2021
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://acp.copernicus.org/preprints/acp-2021-584/acp-2021-584-AC1-supplement.pdf
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AC1: 'Author comment on RC1', Tamara Emmerichs, 04 Aug 2021
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RC2: 'Comment on acp-2021-584', Anonymous Referee #2, 12 Sep 2021
In this manuscript, the authors run a series of sensitivity studies using the atmospheric chemistry model EMAC to test model sensitivity of ozone and NO2 to weather-controlled processes. Specifically, they test water complexes, dry deposition, drought stress, soil emissions, and lightning. They find that the combination of all modifications leads to a reduction in EMAC global ozone burden by 20%, bringing the model into alignment with other model estimates and closer to observations. The water complex modification appears to be the most consequential change for ozone concentrations. The authors compare their model output to observations from the TOAR database and satellite NO2 products. The authors find that their modifications lead to an underestimate of NO2.
This manuscript is interesting and has potential to be a good contribution to the literature. However, the organization of the manuscript is confusing, and many details need to be fleshed out before it can be published.
Organization-wise, there is a lot of text scattered throughout the results that would be appropriate in the introduction and methods sections. As an example, section 4 details the author’s reasoning for including the water complex, which is information that should be introduced at the beginning of the paper to give readers context for why this is included. Similarly for section 4.1, the kinetics are described but this should be placed in a methods section. This occurs throughout all sections 4-8 and makes the paper convoluted to read, as the organization is so different from what one expects when reading a scientific paper. I don’t know where to find the information I need to properly understand what is being done, and I suggest the authors reorganize to a more traditional format.
More context is also needed in the introduction for understanding why some parameters are the ones examined. I think the reasoning for the water complex and dry deposition is there, but it would benefit from also including the introductory information that is presented in sections 4 and above. The reasoning behind the HONO and lightning NOx sensitivities should be more fleshed out and the connection made clearer. Right now, the connection to weather-driven processes is missing, especially for soil HONO.
The methods also need more fleshing out. Some methods are presented in sections 4.1, 5.1, etc., but methods for the HONO sensitivity need to be explained more, especially Table A1, which currently is uninterpretable for a reader unfamiliar with Oswald’s work.
Further, a justification for the day and nighttime analyses instead of a seasonal analysis should be provided. Weather-driven processes typically have strong seasonality, so I would think that would be a priority for the authors. I suggest that the authors include a seasonal analysis if possible.
Minor comments:
Line 253. “The contribution of the RO2/NO reaction to the change of the Ox production is with 7% much smaller than the 70% contribution by the HO2/NO reaction.” This sentence is confusing and I am having trouble interpreting it. Please reword.
Line 291. “Since the newly implemented cuticular uptake…” This is not a complete sentence. Consider adding this phrase to the previous sentence. Other fragments occur throughout, including lines 296 and 306.
Line 363. Can the authors provide more of an explanation for the HONO/NOx ratio? What does this ratio tell us?
Figures and Tables:
Table 4. Why is the comparison done to the third IPCC report rather than a more recent one? Do more recent reports not contain this information?
Table A1. As mentioned previously, this table does not mean anything to people who have not studied Oswald’s work.
Figures 7 & 9. Consider making these into difference plots, rather than having readers look for differences between two panels. The authors could even consider adding a third panel that shows the difference.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2021-584-RC2
Status: closed
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RC1: 'Comment on acp-2021-584', Anonymous Referee #1, 22 Jul 2021
This paper explores the impact of several changes to a global chemical transport model on tropospheric ozone, in particular the role of water vapor in chemical kinetics, dry deposition, and natural NOx, isoprene and HONO emissions. The authors have attempted to harmonize their study under the theme of ‘weather-driven processes on tropospheric ozone’, but their attempt fails. Not only are processes tied to meteorology in rather crude ways (which my main complaint is that the paper does not acknowledge), but the focus on annual and summer average global distributions is inconsistent with the theme of furthering understanding of the impact of weather-driven processes on ozone. The paper, including the background and motivation, lacks focus and direction, and often does not reflect current knowledge (including current understanding of processes examined). In particular, the papers referenced are often inappropriate, and the knowledge base cited is incomplete. In theory, this paper is much more suitable for Geoscientific Model Development, but needs substantial improvement, new analysis, and reframing, including clear articulation of what we are learning, before publication anywhere.
First, the authors alter the reaction kinetics related to HO2+NO and RO2+NO with respect to water vapor. Most of the impact is from HO2+NO. They discuss how this changes chemical production and loss of Ox as compared to other models. Then the authors discuss how this impacts tropospheric composition and dry deposition, but it is unclear what they find in their study that complements other work vs. what others find (that the authors are inferring happens in the model too). It seems like their findings are substantial in terms of tropospheric and surface ozone but honestly I have trouble following what they are doing and putting their findings in the context of uncertainty related to these changes to the reaction kinetics. The authors need to better describe motivate what they had before and why they made the change, and the associated uncertainty. The current motivation makes it seem like these changes are obvious/critical/completely certain, but then why has no one else made them?
Second, the authors describe the impacts of a new dry deposition scheme (previously described by a paper this year in GMD with the same first author). The analysis on dry deposition focuses on surface ozone changes during morning vs. night and simply compares the total loss to dry dep to other models. My first complain is -- what are we learning from this analysis? As is, this analysis does not merit publication. The difference changes to surface ozone during morning vs. night with dry deposition are intriguing, but the authors barely touch on it. My second complaint is that the authors pitch their representation of dry deposition as state of the science when it is not. From what I can tell, the authors’ initial dry deposition scheme was not good, and there are only rather basic improvements to the new one.
Third, the authors describe a new drought dependence of isoprene emissions. The authors only really discuss how this changes annual total isoprene emission totals as compared to previous estimates. The authors barely discuss how this changes summer ozone, although there seem to be interesting changes in Fig. 6. As is, this analysis does not merit a publication.
Fourth, the authors put a simple HONO soil emission parameterization into their model by scaling soil NO emissions by HONO/NO ratios from boreal field samples. As the authors note not many global models have soil HONO emission sources, so theoretically this is new. (The authors need to clarify if this is the first HONO soil emission parameterization in a global model, or one of the first; if the latter, please cite other work). However, I think the authors need to discuss their approach and the related uncertainties more. Just saying soil HONO and NO emissions are ‘mechanistically similar’ and applying boreal field sample values globally is not sufficient. (By ‘boreal’ – the authors mean northern mid latitude regions, right? Or do they mean northern hemisphere?). There also needs to be more substantive analysis of the impact of HONO. The authors discuss how HONO emissions impact the HONO/NOx ratio but do not describe what this ratio means, or why it should be one value over the other. (The reader is also completely relying on the author to summarize the model-observations comparison for HONO/NOx accurately – it is likely worth adding a figure comparing model vs. observed values.) The authors then discuss the impact on OH, NO2 and O3 extremely briefly, and with a lot of speculation. I would ask the authors to focus on what their plots are showing and what we are learning from their analysis, with a particular focus on addressing the goal of the paper (which currently seems to be to address the impact of weather driven processes on ozone, but in my view needs to change).
Fifth, the authors put the Price and Rind lightning NOx scheme into their model and show how it changes NO2 (Figure 16c looks the same to me as Figure 16a though…so I’m not sure I see the improvement). They say it improves the model bias over tropical oceans and N Africa and the central US, but again I do not see this with their figures… They also show how it changes the tropospheric ozone bias compared to IASI (again, hard to see the improvement on Fig 12… I can see that there is a decrease in SOME parts of the tropical Pacific, but a worsening over others in 13c). Nonetheless, the authors’ claim that “the usage of the commonly applied P+R scheme improves significantly the NO2 bias between EMAC and OMI as well as the trop O3 discrepancy to ISAI over the tropical Pacific Ocean” seems like an overstatement, and I’m not sure their current analysis on lightning NOx merits publication.
Overall, while the updates to the model do not always seem to be state of the science, I understand that this is a global model with limited represented of processes like convective updrafts and land surface functioning and soil microbes, & thus parameterizations need to be simple. I want to be clear that I’m not asking the authors to represent everything in a state of the science way, rather better articulate what the state of the science is, and justify their decisions in going the simple route. And of course the authors also need to convey what we are learning from their changes… not just document them.
I also understand that the authors are limited because the surface ozone data for which they use to evaluate their model is mostly for northern mid-latitudes, but many of the changes in ozone occur in the southern hemisphere and tropics, or high northern latitudes. This is an issue for all global modelers, and the authors need to find a better way of addressing this issue. For example, what are we learning from places where we do have observations that can lend confidence to elsewhere? What are other observational constraints that can be used to evaluate poorly sampled areas? There must be something better than one global map of the IASI tropospheric ozone columns and one global map of the OMI tropospheric NO2 columns.
Minor comments (I have many minor comments, only some of which I have taken the time to record here).
Line 3 – I don’t know what ‘the water complex’ refers to
Line 5 – one of the most important reactions
Line 9 – I don’t think it’s true that most trop ozone loss to dry deposition occurs to vegetation, a lot of loss happens to snow and ice and water as recent papers such as Hardacre et al. 2015, Pound et al., 2020 (https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-20-4227-2020), Clifton et al., 2020 (https://doi.org/ 10.1029/2020JD032398) have suggested, despite relatively small deposition velocities over these surfaces
Line 27 – radiative forcing should only be discussed when referring to a change time period
Line 220-230 – will the authors illustrate the changes they are making as described here with equations? I find it very hard to figure out what they are doing vs. just discussing
Line 295-7 – are the authors suggesting here that O3 loss through reaction between O3+NO is underestimated here, and may cause the remainder of the high bias in O3?
Line 389 – can the authors give the uncertainty in a relative sense?
Line 390 – what is the IC/CG ratio?
Line 399 – who describes the Price and Rind scheme as robust?
Line 399 – it’s not just a question of flash frequencies … but also the amount of NOx per flash and how to distribute the NOx vertically
Another minor issue is in their methods the authors often do not give the reader sufficient information. For example, can the authors elaborate on what ‘weakly nudged’ means? Also, discussing the model routines by their names in the model is not very helpful for the reader. Another example is how am I supposed to interpret Table A1 (what does number refer to, what is IGBP category and how is it used, what are the soil samples from? The title is unhelpful).
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2021-584-RC1 -
AC1: 'Author comment on RC1', Tamara Emmerichs, 04 Aug 2021
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://acp.copernicus.org/preprints/acp-2021-584/acp-2021-584-AC1-supplement.pdf
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AC1: 'Author comment on RC1', Tamara Emmerichs, 04 Aug 2021
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RC2: 'Comment on acp-2021-584', Anonymous Referee #2, 12 Sep 2021
In this manuscript, the authors run a series of sensitivity studies using the atmospheric chemistry model EMAC to test model sensitivity of ozone and NO2 to weather-controlled processes. Specifically, they test water complexes, dry deposition, drought stress, soil emissions, and lightning. They find that the combination of all modifications leads to a reduction in EMAC global ozone burden by 20%, bringing the model into alignment with other model estimates and closer to observations. The water complex modification appears to be the most consequential change for ozone concentrations. The authors compare their model output to observations from the TOAR database and satellite NO2 products. The authors find that their modifications lead to an underestimate of NO2.
This manuscript is interesting and has potential to be a good contribution to the literature. However, the organization of the manuscript is confusing, and many details need to be fleshed out before it can be published.
Organization-wise, there is a lot of text scattered throughout the results that would be appropriate in the introduction and methods sections. As an example, section 4 details the author’s reasoning for including the water complex, which is information that should be introduced at the beginning of the paper to give readers context for why this is included. Similarly for section 4.1, the kinetics are described but this should be placed in a methods section. This occurs throughout all sections 4-8 and makes the paper convoluted to read, as the organization is so different from what one expects when reading a scientific paper. I don’t know where to find the information I need to properly understand what is being done, and I suggest the authors reorganize to a more traditional format.
More context is also needed in the introduction for understanding why some parameters are the ones examined. I think the reasoning for the water complex and dry deposition is there, but it would benefit from also including the introductory information that is presented in sections 4 and above. The reasoning behind the HONO and lightning NOx sensitivities should be more fleshed out and the connection made clearer. Right now, the connection to weather-driven processes is missing, especially for soil HONO.
The methods also need more fleshing out. Some methods are presented in sections 4.1, 5.1, etc., but methods for the HONO sensitivity need to be explained more, especially Table A1, which currently is uninterpretable for a reader unfamiliar with Oswald’s work.
Further, a justification for the day and nighttime analyses instead of a seasonal analysis should be provided. Weather-driven processes typically have strong seasonality, so I would think that would be a priority for the authors. I suggest that the authors include a seasonal analysis if possible.
Minor comments:
Line 253. “The contribution of the RO2/NO reaction to the change of the Ox production is with 7% much smaller than the 70% contribution by the HO2/NO reaction.” This sentence is confusing and I am having trouble interpreting it. Please reword.
Line 291. “Since the newly implemented cuticular uptake…” This is not a complete sentence. Consider adding this phrase to the previous sentence. Other fragments occur throughout, including lines 296 and 306.
Line 363. Can the authors provide more of an explanation for the HONO/NOx ratio? What does this ratio tell us?
Figures and Tables:
Table 4. Why is the comparison done to the third IPCC report rather than a more recent one? Do more recent reports not contain this information?
Table A1. As mentioned previously, this table does not mean anything to people who have not studied Oswald’s work.
Figures 7 & 9. Consider making these into difference plots, rather than having readers look for differences between two panels. The authors could even consider adding a third panel that shows the difference.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2021-584-RC2
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